ah :D short such a sweet one Nilanjana :D disappearing act was very nice !
short one na...easy to make it disappear :) :) thanks Ramya!
"and a foghorn trails its vesselsomewhere far over the horizon."I love that!
Thank you for reading..appreciate the feedback!
I like the seashell echoes of the ocean ~ Lovely share ~
the smallest things take us on such amazing trips...thank you
Very nice :)So, what did you hear from the seashell Nilanjana? :)RegardsJayhttp://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/
the entire ocean :) thanks for coming overbest wishes
There is a ring to this one, Nilanjana :D
hope a nice one :D thanks, Ghazala!
i love the thought of reading a verse like a seashell to your ear....very cool...and some nice sounds to go along with it as well...and you should try the form...what is the worst? that you fail and still come away with a poem and a bit of learning?smiles.
Thank you! am learning definitely...that's one Korean form and one Welsh, and before that the Tritina which is still kind of buzz, buzz, buzzing round in my head still...it's the internal rhymes I think that I am intimidated by :) but I shall not think about it now, let it settle to the bottom of the brain and see if something works itself out...thanks again for being here