tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post3769045402235859318..comments2024-03-25T22:25:27.515+05:30Comments on Madly-in-Verse: Storming offNilanjana Bosehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-9978642189339646452012-11-03T00:31:27.038+05:302012-11-03T00:31:27.038+05:30Thanks, and my pleasure entirely :)Thanks, and my pleasure entirely :)Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-21557773074248681322012-11-02T06:09:39.480+05:302012-11-02T06:09:39.480+05:30Oops, sorry about that!Oops, sorry about that!Archna Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838906796617874529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-42695495061300739472012-11-02T06:08:32.461+05:302012-11-02T06:08:32.461+05:30There is no repetition in the truest kind of love....There is no repetition in the truest kind of love. Love the unfettered spirit in this piece. <br /><br />Thanks so much for your visit. Be in touch. :)Archna Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03372418962433999972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-23967671416189156682012-11-01T15:35:13.103+05:302012-11-01T15:35:13.103+05:30thank you!thank you!Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-37090098044777465452012-11-01T15:34:50.743+05:302012-11-01T15:34:50.743+05:30Yes, can't change it, but have different route...Yes, can't change it, but have different routes to take it forward into the future...thanks for reading and the feedback :)Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-26623821375025073782012-11-01T15:33:21.554+05:302012-11-01T15:33:21.554+05:30thank you!thank you!Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-76775645999910009312012-11-01T15:32:51.466+05:302012-11-01T15:32:51.466+05:30thank you for the feedbackthank you for the feedbackNilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-23949585604326282782012-11-01T15:32:25.294+05:302012-11-01T15:32:25.294+05:30thank you...glad you enjoyed itthank you...glad you enjoyed itNilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-72414453024953359002012-11-01T15:31:43.477+05:302012-11-01T15:31:43.477+05:30exactly like apples, vinegar, olives! thank youexactly like apples, vinegar, olives! thank youNilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-80242546128749519382012-11-01T15:30:12.015+05:302012-11-01T15:30:12.015+05:30the ways of the heart are simply wonderful..thanks...the ways of the heart are simply wonderful..thanks for readingNilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-27794051237623967072012-11-01T15:29:02.505+05:302012-11-01T15:29:02.505+05:30women used to dry and perfume their hair with ince...women used to dry and perfume their hair with incense smoke :) thank youNilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-1233836859524248592012-11-01T15:27:05.146+05:302012-11-01T15:27:05.146+05:30the year repeats itself..love rarely does...thanks...the year repeats itself..love rarely does...thanks for readingNilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-72636799005358476522012-11-01T03:51:31.026+05:302012-11-01T03:51:31.026+05:30I love it specially love is tart and green ~ Amaz...I love it specially love is tart and green ~ Amazing writing ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-52101326102356757912012-10-31T19:01:15.226+05:302012-10-31T19:01:15.226+05:30LOVE this! I especially like the lines about keep...LOVE this! I especially like the lines about keeping "wicks and eyebrows trimmed" and "a few of your minds" - so playfully profound! The repetition really drives the point home. We have nowhere to go but forward. You can't change the past. :)Rachel Hoythttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12565668664072704971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-37141566314428755292012-10-31T16:29:32.870+05:302012-10-31T16:29:32.870+05:30Oooh! It's so profound and..LOVELY!!Oooh! It's so profound and..LOVELY!!AmitAaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691653942870794293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-7162005982288371002012-10-31T15:11:52.897+05:302012-10-31T15:11:52.897+05:30This is very thought provoking. Deep, powerful and...This is very thought provoking. Deep, powerful and, a little dark. I love 'got nowhere to go except for where it's been.<br />Lovely imagery all through this. Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-62213143349590114352012-10-31T08:43:46.188+05:302012-10-31T08:43:46.188+05:30Brilliant piece.
The year froths
sour and green...Brilliant piece. <br /><br />The year froths<br />sour and green,<br />it has nowhere to go<br />except where it’s been.<br /><br />...I thought that couldn't be beat but then you did that last stanza. And I agree the repetition adds a haunting effect--and I love it. Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-21389292583551369742012-10-31T08:13:23.890+05:302012-10-31T08:13:23.890+05:30Tart & green like apples, vinegar, olives - ma...Tart & green like apples, vinegar, olives - magic like life pouring forces into glass flasks of repetition here, and creating spells. Love it!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-26039722802125289222012-10-31T06:37:34.616+05:302012-10-31T06:37:34.616+05:30Love is still tart and green
and it’s got everywhe...Love is still tart and green<br />and it’s got everywhere to go<br />except where it’s been...love that...oh the ways of the heart...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-59096914024802880892012-10-31T06:09:28.640+05:302012-10-31T06:09:28.640+05:30love it...the repetition is haunting on some level...love it...the repetition is haunting on some level...i like the change from one to the next....smoked into my hair, love that....love has nowhere and everywhere to go...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-29983436315332950222012-10-31T04:10:21.629+05:302012-10-31T04:10:21.629+05:30I love the repetition of that one line and the fac...I love the repetition of that one line and the fact that the year has nowhere to go except where it has been and love has everywhere to go but where it is done. Exquisite writing~!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com