tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post8369236466239318844..comments2024-03-25T22:25:27.515+05:30Comments on Madly-in-Verse: RFW Halloween House of Horrors : Finding NgoziNilanjana Bosehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comBlogger36125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-81804278458041725932012-11-11T18:36:31.292+05:302012-11-11T18:36:31.292+05:30Thank you, Adura. Great to see you here!Thank you, Adura. Great to see you here!Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-33371743022121464692012-11-10T19:23:31.402+05:302012-11-10T19:23:31.402+05:30An epic. Well crafted, Nilanjana.An epic. Well crafted, Nilanjana.Adura Ojohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10787703060107491771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-31032844989496065012012-10-31T12:17:44.501+05:302012-10-31T12:17:44.501+05:30Hi Rik, nothing silly, all ok, glad you enjoyed th...Hi Rik, nothing silly, all ok, glad you enjoyed the read.Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-72841036306083421832012-10-30T23:29:46.069+05:302012-10-30T23:29:46.069+05:30Hi Nil, this was an emotional roller coaster for m...Hi Nil, this was an emotional roller coaster for me. This is going to sound silly but after reading a couple of stanzas I had to scroll down to the bottom and read the last couple of stanzas and then re-read it again from start to finish. A love horror story in verse..you have always made my day by sending me these little anecdotes of yours but this was horrifically beautiful!<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12064367185282017250noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-15077145806922418612012-10-29T11:27:41.179+05:302012-10-29T11:27:41.179+05:30Thank you...no need for any apologies. Glad you e...Thank you...no need for any apologies. Glad you enjoyed the poem...wish you a great week ahead.Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-28500440801179759532012-10-29T11:26:03.898+05:302012-10-29T11:26:03.898+05:30Hello Denise, and thank you! am a little late myse...Hello Denise, and thank you! am a little late myself as I have been away...an anthology would be a nice idea....thanks for the chance to participate!Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-35404876685718933142012-10-28T07:45:26.618+05:302012-10-28T07:45:26.618+05:30This was beautifully written! I enjoyed this so mu...This was beautifully written! I enjoyed this so much, and was impressed with how well this poem flowed. Wonderful piece. <br /><br />Apologies for being late; I am just now getting through all of the House of Horrors excerpts. Hope you're having a great weekend so far! <br /><br />~Wendy Lu<br /><br /><a href="http://xtheredangelx.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">The Red Angel Blog</a>Wendy Luhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08048944852796207898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-39905262130977264422012-10-28T07:33:26.661+05:302012-10-28T07:33:26.661+05:30Hello Nilanjana, well what can I say? I'm back...Hello Nilanjana, well what can I say? I'm back for the third time to ponder over every line as I am writing your critique. I am very drawn to your poem. This is one of the reasons our Wrap Up is so late - we only have 3 awards and so many more have written to this level. Whatever the outcome, know that we are all blown away by your poem. Just imagine if you go back and polish it to whatever Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-39501227117342380422012-10-23T10:03:14.987+05:302012-10-23T10:03:14.987+05:30Thank you for the feedback. Glad you enjoyed the p...Thank you for the feedback. Glad you enjoyed the poem.Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-11990914238883540242012-10-23T10:01:22.517+05:302012-10-23T10:01:22.517+05:30Hi Nancy,
Many thanks for your warm words. Much ...Hi Nancy,<br /><br />Many thanks for your warm words. Much appreciated.Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-21055270499485155842012-10-23T09:59:57.483+05:302012-10-23T09:59:57.483+05:30Thank youThank youNilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-80382945421706401812012-10-23T09:59:28.878+05:302012-10-23T09:59:28.878+05:30Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you.Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you.Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-35926023630544512772012-10-22T20:26:47.672+05:302012-10-22T20:26:47.672+05:30I so enjoy poetry well written. This in particular...I so enjoy poetry well written. This in particular conjures up such raw emotion. The tree of life and death is such a powerful prop for this AMAZING poem.<br /><br />Stunning imagery and passion. What more can I say?Michael Di Gesuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-77448805152330842372012-10-21T19:33:06.648+05:302012-10-21T19:33:06.648+05:30Hi Nilanjana
Moving with lots of emotion and scary...Hi Nilanjana<br />Moving with lots of emotion and scary at every turn. Great job.<br />NancyN. R. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02174506528962095858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-58632430969581955172012-10-21T17:52:27.565+05:302012-10-21T17:52:27.565+05:30A whole story in verse, very clever!A whole story in verse, very clever!Charmaine Clancyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18059559142070140041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-44979447447579578422012-10-21T14:22:19.727+05:302012-10-21T14:22:19.727+05:30Uhm, just Wow. This was an awesome poem. Heart w...Uhm, just Wow. This was an awesome poem. Heart wrenching, and emotional. I don't know, I just liked it.<br /><br />......dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-5833349128897697722012-10-21T13:47:08.113+05:302012-10-21T13:47:08.113+05:30Thank you, Denise for your wishes. I am looking f...Thank you, Denise for your wishes. I am looking forward to the judging too, but mine is not a contender this time I think :) The rest of the entries are as usual a mind blowing, awesome creepy lot!!! :DNilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-35846613506624891842012-10-21T13:39:27.250+05:302012-10-21T13:39:27.250+05:30Thank you!Thank you!Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-58613049996429891412012-10-21T13:38:29.672+05:302012-10-21T13:38:29.672+05:30Thank you Anna, for the detailed assessment as alw...Thank you Anna, for the detailed assessment as always. I truly appreciate the time and the thoroughness of your critiques..you are the only person here who has mentioned that this does not fit the prompt very well, truly value that honesty. <br /><br />Your post seemed intriguing and absorbing to me, but of course you must be the judge as to how it fits into the final work. Reading an excerpt isNilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-76601824197504388492012-10-21T13:20:32.372+05:302012-10-21T13:20:32.372+05:30Thank you.Thank you.Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-258573129383986152012-10-21T13:20:13.809+05:302012-10-21T13:20:13.809+05:30Thank you for reading and the feedback..enjoy the ...Thank you for reading and the feedback..enjoy the visit to your hometown!Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-22928867818361108352012-10-21T10:54:17.246+05:302012-10-21T10:54:17.246+05:30Here I am for my second reading. This is awesome. ...Here I am for my second reading. This is awesome. I wish I could write poetry as well as you. I was looking at 'Poetry for Dummies' at my library yesterday. I need to pick it up for a few tips!<br /><br />Best of luck with the judging! I'm glad it's Ann and Nas who have to choose from this awesome lineup! :DDenise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-16996024944352239572012-10-21T06:07:05.971+05:302012-10-21T06:07:05.971+05:30Nilanjana,
Now I know why poetry is my favorite ...Nilanjana,<br /><br /> Now I know why poetry is my favorite form of expression! What a beautiful way to tell a haunting story!<br /> Congratulations!Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-6624377113187503482012-10-21T04:29:33.485+05:302012-10-21T04:29:33.485+05:30The night between Saturday and Sunday October 20th...The night between Saturday and Sunday October 20th & 21st, 2012 12.33 a.m.<br /><br />Dear Nilanjana,<br /><br />I love this poem. You have taken the theme of loosing the mementos and landscape of childhood and past, and how the forces of change are everywhere present and invincible. And you are able to describe all of these subtitle shifts of thought with a lyrical, rhythmic - rhyming Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17926688000745346961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-83358105171464542922012-10-21T02:34:57.849+05:302012-10-21T02:34:57.849+05:30Your poetry was full of raw emotion. Nicely done. ...Your poetry was full of raw emotion. Nicely done. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691497935668743387noreply@blogger.com