tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post8846687143252063591..comments2024-03-25T22:25:27.515+05:30Comments on Madly-in-Verse: Cucumber shrineNilanjana Bosehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-42090121462626186572012-09-20T10:00:14.732+05:302012-09-20T10:00:14.732+05:30Thank you. Much appreciated.Thank you. Much appreciated.Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-79214671884434550482012-09-19T20:18:54.743+05:302012-09-19T20:18:54.743+05:30I like your focus as well as the use of metaphor. ...I like your focus as well as the use of metaphor. I specially like these lines:<br /><br />I think of you so close<br />slashed cucumber fresh your hands<br />on my back, and my knees<br />still gritty with the sands<br />on which the vine grows.<br /><br />Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-10644979171876026712012-09-19T12:29:43.804+05:302012-09-19T12:29:43.804+05:30Scents paint like nothing else can! :) Thanks for ...Scents paint like nothing else can! :) Thanks for your comment...glad you enjoyed the poetry..Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-10591360923069228032012-09-19T12:28:13.793+05:302012-09-19T12:28:13.793+05:30Thank you... for the visit and feedback...much app...Thank you... for the visit and feedback...much appreciatedNilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-29186100773052193092012-09-19T12:26:14.688+05:302012-09-19T12:26:14.688+05:30Thank you...love that image of words playing toget...Thank you...love that image of words playing together :) glad you liked itNilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-23763601199690048132012-09-19T12:24:37.367+05:302012-09-19T12:24:37.367+05:30Thank you for stopping by. Glad you enjoyed the w...Thank you for stopping by. Glad you enjoyed the words :)Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-84449485775453779612012-09-19T05:03:20.759+05:302012-09-19T05:03:20.759+05:30Like the imagery, the senses of touch and scents. ...Like the imagery, the senses of touch and scents. Really like how each stanza brings together a scene or portrait, cringe and attract. Enjoyed reading this. :)Ravenblackhttp://theotherdayplace.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-90485277762836543162012-09-19T03:06:19.651+05:302012-09-19T03:06:19.651+05:30wow really cool verse...and very natural...i wonde...wow really cool verse...and very natural...i wonder you are the second to use morning breath for the sky...pretty cool...i like the pondering at the end as well..some rich imagery along the way...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-52130288574740505152012-09-19T02:42:08.611+05:302012-09-19T02:42:08.611+05:30I love the sound of this, the words play together ...I love the sound of this, the words play together very well. I also like the mood you created.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-47006557804882415902012-09-18T10:55:42.589+05:302012-09-18T10:55:42.589+05:30Amazing word play!
My first time here...shall come...Amazing word play!<br />My first time here...shall come back for more :)Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.com