tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post1115024228158354102..comments2024-03-25T22:25:27.515+05:30Comments on Madly-in-Verse: Honest thingsNilanjana Bosehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-56930785685420699972012-12-15T21:59:53.462+05:302012-12-15T21:59:53.462+05:30Very good second voice...this line stood out for m...Very good second voice...this line stood out for me:<br /><br />a vague disquiet that honest things can also end in disguise.Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-20671980049700230362012-12-15T17:20:26.229+05:302012-12-15T17:20:26.229+05:30not all untruths are lies...that stood out for me ...not all untruths are lies...that stood out for me and kinda seems the core, the poem wraps around..not an easy situation at allClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-33426572293888439142012-12-15T14:04:45.064+05:302012-12-15T14:04:45.064+05:30Thanks you for reading. Partings are always painfu...Thanks you for reading. Partings are always painful, sometimes in unanticipated ways..Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-32186820876387028292012-12-15T14:03:01.958+05:302012-12-15T14:03:01.958+05:30Thanks for reading.Thanks for reading.Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-50469368030234835652012-12-15T14:02:32.587+05:302012-12-15T14:02:32.587+05:30Thank you for your comment..Agree that they are al...Thank you for your comment..Agree that they are always hard, however deep or shallow the friendships...either hard to actually part, or just hard to handle with the right degree of involvement!Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-26307512592442093212012-12-15T13:57:59.416+05:302012-12-15T13:57:59.416+05:30Thank you for reading.Thank you for reading.Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-68115676017126476522012-12-15T13:57:26.114+05:302012-12-15T13:57:26.114+05:30Thank you for the feedback. Glad you enjoyed it.Thank you for the feedback. Glad you enjoyed it.Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-17122444785584114682012-12-15T06:48:28.682+05:302012-12-15T06:48:28.682+05:30hmmm...sad. "But no-one came back to knock.&...hmmm...sad. "But no-one came back to knock." That waiting sounds painful, but I wager the realization that eventually came was even more so.RMPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-62100701544849096752012-12-15T05:51:25.861+05:302012-12-15T05:51:25.861+05:30Interesting view of "summing up" and per...Interesting view of "summing up" and perfunctory goodbyes.Sabio Lantzhttp://yuanfields.wordpress.com/2012/12/14/uselessness/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-1641759698889402512012-12-15T04:44:24.072+05:302012-12-15T04:44:24.072+05:30taught me that not all untruths are lies...what an...taught me that not all untruths are lies...what an intriguing line that is...<br /><br />partings are hard...especially when we dont see them except in hindsight....<br /><br />i end with a rather odd feel at the end...much like i imagine the situation felt...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-27247194214628209552012-12-15T03:35:49.039+05:302012-12-15T03:35:49.039+05:30Sad reality that most of us face at one time or an...Sad reality that most of us face at one time or another. The 2nd person works well for this. Thanks for sharing.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-64527609856847661502012-12-15T02:54:16.188+05:302012-12-15T02:54:16.188+05:30Thought-provoking write, especially the part about...Thought-provoking write, especially the part about not all untruths are lies. From your poem I GET that! The second person form really worked to convey your message and to draw the reader personally in. Nice.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com