tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post2793624261817636367..comments2024-03-25T22:25:27.515+05:30Comments on Madly-in-Verse: Might as well be quietNilanjana Bosehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-84716688584625809602012-09-08T15:08:06.423+05:302012-09-08T15:08:06.423+05:30Thank you for the feedback, much appreciated. The...Thank you for the feedback, much appreciated. The message will surely be disregarded...too many words bubbling everywhere..Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-23230140604642412202012-09-08T15:06:13.918+05:302012-09-08T15:06:13.918+05:30Not very good at being quiet :) the rhyme scheme f...Not very good at being quiet :) the rhyme scheme for this one is based on the ghazal - an Eastern form which is characterised by the repetition of a phrase/word after the rhyme word...the ghazal has its own set of stylised symbols, which is why it came to my mind at the promptNilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-37915709130473404502012-09-08T15:00:15.460+05:302012-09-08T15:00:15.460+05:30Always difficult for me to know when to keep quiet...Always difficult for me to know when to keep quiet...thank you for the visit, reading and feedbackNilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-69029294483498540892012-09-08T14:57:39.294+05:302012-09-08T14:57:39.294+05:30love poetry that explores new symbols...thanks for...love poetry that explores new symbols...thanks for reading!Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-51004637882701542622012-09-08T12:38:58.082+05:302012-09-08T12:38:58.082+05:30There's a challenging tension between the pass...There's a challenging tension between the passion of the writing and the proposed quietism of the message. Very nicely managed. I like the chanted repetition of the tagline and the sense at the end that the message will be disregarded.Dick Joneshttp://patteran.typepad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-68385021627624630202012-09-08T02:03:40.103+05:302012-09-08T02:03:40.103+05:30But I bet you aren't! Nicely done.But I bet you aren't! Nicely done.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-1121833681075331622012-09-07T23:22:19.855+05:302012-09-07T23:22:19.855+05:30if they get you to be quiet, you have surely lost ...if they get you to be quiet, you have surely lost the battle...some fun rhythm to this one...nice symbolism in the candle...and we always create new ones surely...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-78680701106639814402012-09-07T22:38:19.360+05:302012-09-07T22:38:19.360+05:30ah no...don't be quiet..symbols seem to have a...ah no...don't be quiet..symbols seem to have a fleeting nature sometimes except the well worn ones and we're always searching for new ones, don't we...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.com