tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post6892968081288081803..comments2024-03-08T10:43:36.275+05:30Comments on Madly-in-Verse: Quinnet : ClaustrophobiaNilanjana Bosehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-55882532127955781132014-09-16T08:50:07.985+05:302014-09-16T08:50:07.985+05:30Thanks much for the detailed critique, love the i....Thanks much for the detailed critique, love the i.d, btw :) Pleased you enjoyed the poetry.Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-56245423097264633912014-09-15T21:41:08.811+05:302014-09-15T21:41:08.811+05:30The imagery is beautiful and the overall effect is...The imagery is beautiful and the overall effect is quite stunning - even more when the whole is contemplated upon the second or third reading. I got a smidge confused moving from the first to the second stanzas, but once I adjusted to the pace (and that a scream didn't emit when the vultures are removed), I settled into the poem's turbulent waters again. It's beautiful. The final Sweeper of Dreamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00078459443293328745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-71442639986322384342014-09-14T23:58:19.082+05:302014-09-14T23:58:19.082+05:30It does seem a long time ago, doesn't it? Too...It does seem a long time ago, doesn't it? Too many things happening is the cause...for me at any rate. Five is also a prime, btw :) definitely worth a shot imo. Hope all goes well with you Sabeeha.<br />Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-26851801671309665542014-09-14T22:46:48.473+05:302014-09-14T22:46:48.473+05:30I haven't had the chance to experiment with th...I haven't had the chance to experiment with the five line stanza yet. I remember you telling me to give it a go for the april challenge too! Seems a mighty long time ago. As for the poem, it is beautifully crafted as usual :) picturesque words, giving us a sneak peak to another world.Midnight scribbleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08202750447005185096noreply@blogger.com