tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post6942372652691589976..comments2024-03-25T22:25:27.515+05:30Comments on Madly-in-Verse: ChoiceNilanjana Bosehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-70035110864718317422013-03-16T03:56:37.509+05:302013-03-16T03:56:37.509+05:30Wheew, I was worried it would be offensive in some...Wheew, I was worried it would be offensive in someway.<br /><br />Also, for me, I am finding that the more I write, the process becomes a bit more mysterious -- as if possessed and forgetful. Well, for some poems. My daughter and I talked about that this morning.<br /><br />That was a fun explanation. Thank you.Sabio Lantzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12963476276106907984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-84000401196797546022013-03-16T03:52:43.333+05:302013-03-16T03:52:43.333+05:30Thank you for reading and the feedback, much value...Thank you for reading and the feedback, much valued.Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-56805194616328972272013-03-16T03:51:05.082+05:302013-03-16T03:51:05.082+05:30Whoa! First of all let me just say how impressed I...Whoa! First of all let me just say how impressed I am with your detailed analyses/questions. <br /><br />I have nothing against revealing any thoughts behind poems, so long as I actually can figure them out myself :) very often I can't really articulate them with any coherence. The process of writing is quite uncontrolled and organic, the words choose me rather than the other way around :D<brNilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-80433051848010915792013-03-16T00:17:35.891+05:302013-03-16T00:17:35.891+05:30Thank you.Thank you.Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-78904878888990149002013-03-16T00:16:59.815+05:302013-03-16T00:16:59.815+05:30Thank you for a wonderful prompt and your feedback...Thank you for a wonderful prompt and your feedback, truly valued.Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-54007535380456798862013-03-16T00:15:49.778+05:302013-03-16T00:15:49.778+05:30Thank you.Thank you.Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-51461684029186385402013-03-16T00:15:02.559+05:302013-03-16T00:15:02.559+05:30thank you..thank you..Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-45674320174145618122013-03-16T00:14:28.595+05:302013-03-16T00:14:28.595+05:30Difficult and sometimes ups the novelty quotient t...Difficult and sometimes ups the novelty quotient too, thanks for reading.Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-41067720694695753862013-03-16T00:12:38.728+05:302013-03-16T00:12:38.728+05:30thank you!thank you!Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-3862989033461765402013-03-16T00:11:37.229+05:302013-03-16T00:11:37.229+05:30soft mud between bare toes is one of the loveliest...soft mud between bare toes is one of the loveliest feelings! thanks for readingNilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-66483955411122785172013-03-16T00:10:43.589+05:302013-03-16T00:10:43.589+05:30thanksthanksNilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-2601021491712068642013-03-16T00:10:11.596+05:302013-03-16T00:10:11.596+05:30Value the feedback, thank you.Value the feedback, thank you.Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-44481118789508733752013-03-16T00:09:30.763+05:302013-03-16T00:09:30.763+05:30Thanks for the feedback.Thanks for the feedback.Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-24511855192152534232013-03-16T00:08:36.135+05:302013-03-16T00:08:36.135+05:30Thank you for reading.Thank you for reading.Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-85363717008889996672013-03-16T00:07:25.728+05:302013-03-16T00:07:25.728+05:30Thanks!Thanks!Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-51905444437905049892013-03-16T00:06:55.331+05:302013-03-16T00:06:55.331+05:30Entirely true, upto each of us where we want to wa...Entirely true, upto each of us where we want to walk... thanks for readingNilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-26532950468397059042013-03-16T00:05:56.237+05:302013-03-16T00:05:56.237+05:30difficult choices many of them, thanks for reading...difficult choices many of them, thanks for reading.Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-75719079110939749112013-03-16T00:04:42.146+05:302013-03-16T00:04:42.146+05:30Thank you, and good buzz at the pub :) welcome to ...Thank you, and good buzz at the pub :) welcome to visit anytime!Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-55139339566886872682013-03-15T23:04:37.799+05:302013-03-15T23:04:37.799+05:30This is just lovely - I really think this is a won...This is just lovely - I really think this is a wonderful use of this form and just terrific poetry. k. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-61648704525974797142013-03-15T17:24:15.401+05:302013-03-15T17:24:15.401+05:30@ Nilan,
Your poem alludes me, but I want to '...<b>@ Nilan</b>,<br /><br />Your poem alludes me, but I want to 'get it', if there is something to be gotten. And is often the case, the comments don't give hints: either no one dares ask or they all get it. So here I go (since I love your writing):<br /><br />Questions/Thoughts:<br /><br />(1) What is the "it in line 3? Using a pronoun makes me took back to Rivers or Doors (in Sabio Lantzhttp://yuanfields.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-88421246297165136142013-03-15T17:04:00.146+05:302013-03-15T17:04:00.146+05:30Lovely images, especially the lashes.Lovely images, especially the lashes.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-75355460546178145272013-03-15T15:07:09.082+05:302013-03-15T15:07:09.082+05:30The contrast you paint is made clearer by the brev...The contrast you paint is made clearer by the brevity of the form - which you have handled with panache.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-77791363226177057862013-03-15T14:08:03.083+05:302013-03-15T14:08:03.083+05:30This is how a cinquain should be.Strong juxtaposit...This is how a cinquain should be.Strong juxtaposition and perfect rythm. well done.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-14201492733926531342013-03-15T13:15:48.012+05:302013-03-15T13:15:48.012+05:30...ah, a sharp one... i liked it... smiles......ah, a sharp one... i liked it... smiles...kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-38529681303051476762013-03-15T12:07:51.986+05:302013-03-15T12:07:51.986+05:30They depict exactly how hard it sometimes is to ma...They depict exactly how hard it sometimes is to make a decision...Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.com