tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post7751605720118951068..comments2024-03-25T22:25:27.515+05:30Comments on Madly-in-Verse: On and off the DGP ExpresswayNilanjana Bosehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-46649824897654557372013-05-05T20:56:11.904+05:302013-05-05T20:56:11.904+05:30Very vibrant imagery I must say and what expressio...Very vibrant imagery I must say and what expressions!!! It reminded me of a loooong drive and seeing the sky through the windscreen of a car racing ahead of time vanderloosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15974007236500702721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-9959420384848279162013-05-03T13:55:10.290+05:302013-05-03T13:55:10.290+05:30Thanks all for stopping here and reading. Can'...Thanks all for stopping here and reading. Can't begin to say how much I value the feedback!Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-32108146270837382232013-05-02T23:13:49.237+05:302013-05-02T23:13:49.237+05:30really evocative of place...i love the sky pulling...really evocative of place...i love the sky pulling its blanket across in the end as well...wonderful imagery...smiles...we have to find the beauty in the world...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-11658875788845224402013-05-02T21:43:49.005+05:302013-05-02T21:43:49.005+05:30Lovely, I saw it as the recognition of nature amid...Lovely, I saw it as the recognition of nature amidst the life and stress of city life.<br /><br />Can't wait to see your RFW 'Letter' challenge!Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-61618814536801500092013-05-02T17:18:13.928+05:302013-05-02T17:18:13.928+05:30I was on Ecstasy !!! Real Life fantasy .. the numb...I was on Ecstasy !!! Real Life fantasy .. the number i recall after reading these lines !! :) Jack | MySay.inhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17052561298706164052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-14553398259909997772013-05-02T16:25:46.707+05:302013-05-02T16:25:46.707+05:30Nicely composed.......
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KenfoliosNicely composed.......<br /><br /><a href="http://debnature.blogspot.in" rel="nofollow">Debnature</a><br /><a href="http://www.kenfolios.com" rel="nofollow">Kenfolios</a><br />Debopamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04967509738595098541noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-27716908546241569932013-05-02T15:45:32.388+05:302013-05-02T15:45:32.388+05:30
The sky draws its pink fleece...Nicely penned! :)...<br />The sky draws its pink fleece...Nicely penned! :)ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-85286560051351433452013-05-02T13:32:45.206+05:302013-05-02T13:32:45.206+05:30To my mind it invokes a drive through the tarmac a...To my mind it invokes a drive through the tarmac and across uncharted routes. There is something pent up just under the surface that I can't quite place, symbolised by the speck in the sky. umashankarhttp://uspandey.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-6898640541048843972013-05-02T11:07:10.042+05:302013-05-02T11:07:10.042+05:30Hi Denise,
Welcome back! Good to see you. Making...Hi Denise,<br /><br />Welcome back! Good to see you. Making my way to RFW just after. Letters too delicious to pass up :)Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3147719773752098767.post-88796218082220207922013-05-02T10:53:36.606+05:302013-05-02T10:53:36.606+05:30Hi Nilanjana, I'm sure this is more than a ...Hi Nilanjana, I'm sure this is more than a 'nature' poem, but I loved it on that level. The ending was especially brilliant - 'the road now held tender in the palms<br />of darkness, cradled lullaby-soft in its arms.'<br /><br />Lovely.<br /><br />Denise<br /><br />PS Did you see RFW has the LETTERS challenge up? Hope you can make it!!Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.com