Monday, 9 March 2026

Braiding hair

 


When this war’s over, when the birds come back to sing,

I’ll draw you close again in the velvet evening,

I’ll sit you down in front of me, part straight your hair,

braid in strings of jasmines, breathe in the perfumed air.

 

The sulphur smells of anguish and mushrooming smoke

from the rigs and pits and lives of shattered folk,

rows of half size coffins, waiting by half size graves,

rise and ebb as the tides, advance, recede in waves.

 

When the war’s over and the nightingales are back

to replace the sirens and the endless air attacks,

in the inner courtyard dusks will gather and still

you and I’ll sit together in the sea-blue chill.

 

The sky’s a long range missile, Earth’s a long dispute

and all metals forged and sharpened to point and shoot,

all ships are sunken wrecks not one to the rescue,

the tides – all they do is crash over me and you.

 

When it’s finished and the earth’s taken back all things

and made them whole again – the hills and squares and springs,

I’ll take out your grandmother’s comb and run it slow

like a prayer through your hair as the sunset glows.

 

 

The sky’s a dragon’s breath, the town’s potential rubble,

a few men in uniform march out on the double,

the grass is scorched black, the trees stripped of foliage.

Our eyes tire of alerts, our nerves are taut, on edge.

 

When it’s over – they say both the good and bad must pass,

I’ll sit and watch you run again on new spring-grown grass,

shirt untucked at your waist, hair loosened from your braid,

your face lit with laughter, your footsteps unafraid.



I guess its quite obvious where that's come from. It goes on for a few more stanzas, but I will spare you, it's long enough as it is  :)


I've been a bit stressed - there are friends stuck in the ME who are waiting to be repatriated and even more bad news - some friends who can't be airlifted anywhere because that's their only home. All bad things must also pass, but it doesn't look like the Iran war is ending very soon. Bahrain in particular is super vulnerable because it's very close to Iran and because of the presence of the fifth fleet. The locality in Bahrain where my husband worked has been attacked, 30 plus people injured, some quite seriously. Not personally known to me, yet it all feels terribly close and personal. Every morning I wake up hoping it's been called off but no, it's still on. Every day brings more distressing news, the ambit getting wider.  Les misérables all round. 


I was/am also planning to do the upcoming A-Z Challenge and this is my advance warning post for that. I'd originally thought I'd do the theme reveal with this, but that feels entirely inappropriate given my general unprepared and somewhat frazzled state. I'm booked to travel during the Easter break too, which of course is looking fraught with uncertainty by the bucketful right now. Travel times also coincide with the Challenge key dates, apart from coinciding with the #$%*&^ war I mean. So...though I intend to write themed posts, I am keeping things fluid for the  present. I'll see what I can do and how...I'm going to be there is all I'm saying as of now. 


I hope your near and dear ones are all safe and well and nowhere within range of any missiles. 





8 comments:

  1. A very moving poem. All my near and dear are safe for now, but for how long. How long can this country rain death and escape.
    I look forward to your a to z. I haven't got a reveal yet .

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    1. No one escapes anything, Kristin. We all pay the price for each of our actions (or inactions). I'm looking forward to your A-Z too, I know it's going to be fascinating as per usual. Well wishes for you and yours always, keep safe and well.

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  2. Hari Om
    Articulate as ever on matters that bring despair... and well done for facing up to A-Z again, something that hasn't even flittered in my consciousness this year. YAM xx

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    1. I'm tired of the nonstop violence and having to witness the civilian casualties on all sides. A-Z will hopefully be a diversion.

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  3. Despite seeing the Iranian people gain a little freedom, war is still dark and deadly. It's not supposed to last a long time so we'll see what happens.

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    1. Bombing sovereign countries doesn't bring freedom, I've lived long enough to witness that for myself. Wishing a speedy end to the unnecessary violence that is killing young people across the world.

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  4. Such a superb poem - just tears my heart. War! What is it good for? Absolutely nothing. Take care and my thoughts are with you on that side of the world. No one I personally know is advocating this mess. I feel compelled to just apologize...

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    1. So glad you enjoyed the poem!

      There's no need to apologise, we all know who and what has started this unnecessary war. We have a proverb in Bengali - the kings fight and the reeds get crushed. Sadly reeds very far from the battlefield get crushed in modern warfare. Hope better sense prevails soonest and all parties can be brought back to the negotiating table.

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