Everything must thin
for the dark to come infor the light to pass through
and become the dark too
all must be effaced
and the feelings facedand maybe that’s just light
but could also be the night.
It may be either-or
but equally, nuanced morea long gradual fade
from slow light to shade
both of them must thin
so how’ll you determinewhich of them will do
and which is finally true?
Intense poem, though i can't come up with an answer myself. Loved the contemplative take and the choice and flow of words:)
ReplyDeleteNo-one has the answers :) thank you for the feedback!
Deletei could read my life in the deceptive shades of light you've portrayed here :) Every time I was stuck not knowing what to believe and what not; every time I was confused on my own perceptions, every time life teased me on my notion.
ReplyDeletei read it thrice and each time i see more meaning in it. maybe some thoughts you never wanted to convey, maybe every thought you wished to share.
Thank you for the detailed reading and response.
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