Not winds and waves, all the normal things
leave her swivelled eyes glassed out dollshe finds her songs in broken, breathless wings
the jagged knives, the ragged guitar strings
knobs of silence tumbled in freefallnot winds and waves, all the normal things
she twirls and twists, the dance sharply brings
heels together; misery is for all;she finds her songs in broken, breathless wings
the metal rattles in undone couplings
the baby sleep of cells, the strangling wallsnot winds and waves, all the normal things
the clasp of flesh as it sucks and clings
to insane twigs of bones and snapped soulsshe finds her songs in broken, breathless wings
she turns again, the hem of her skirt swings
her lights are blinded bats, nights burnt out coalsnot winds and waves, all the normal things
she finds her songs in broken, breathless wings
It needs absolutely no links, goes without saying which well the verse above draws from. Probably the very first villanelle I ever read, or maybe it ties with this one. Anyways, deep reverence.
Nilanjana, this is so powerful. That refrain will haunt me: 'she finds her songs in broken, breathless wings'. I loved this.
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Great to see you here! As for displaying the badge...of course!! :) So excited.
DeleteGlad you liked the poem.
well, i am not the right person to appreciate poetry but i can imagine the kind of effort, skill and imagination required to come up with a piece like this. Brilliantly done!
ReplyDeleteThank you aunek...but anyone can read/critique poetry, it's a piece of cake! :) Only the first 17 syllables are sometimes hard, after that it gets easier... :D
DeleteSuch beautiful imagery!
ReplyDeleteYou so deserve that badge -- such a wonderful talent!
And anyone - can't -- you are unique!
Thank you Yolanda, for such a lovely and warm compliment! Thanks much too for the visit in mid A-Z, I for one am just loving each one of your posts, did I tell you? :) :)
DeleteThis gave me goosebumps! Brilliant :)
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thanks...glad you enjoyed it.
DeletePlath is truly life-changing..