Listening
non-stop to old melodies
dredged
up from clogged memories of childhood,
frayed
satin ribbons, pressed flowers in scrapbooks,
caught
in folds of pages, in an obscure crease
of
time and place. Reminiscent of things
I
hardly think about now, the drizzle
of
sunlight through leaves, long-tailed kites, and whistles,
wide open skies, gentle lands, and landings.
Halfway
across the world, streets, towns convulse -
someone,
something has fallen, crashed again,
the
earth is slack jawed, crushed to smithereens
a
lone armed man gloats at a feeble pulse.
Can't find a tune to match, something titled -
‘never yours, with aversion’? Unbridled.
Never yours, with aversion would have a very, very strong beat - and those who could sing the chorus would be legion...
ReplyDeleteYeah, that's how I thought it should be too - strong beat, firm voice rising steady to a crescendo drowning out the hatred
DeleteThere is no song for that...
ReplyDeleteThere should be, I think outrage should have its own poem/tune
Deleteindeed, not worthy of a tune. But this poem is worthy of much thought. I started off in a song memory mode and then went whoa! and turned off the music in my head
ReplyDeleteWhy does poetry/music celebrate love, but stop short of condemning hatred and violence?
DeleteI agree with Joanne. The transition in this poem is haunting.
ReplyDeleteThank you, that's what the sonnet must do if it's to be worthy of its name...
DeleteThe earth is slack-jawed indeed. But if Anne Frank, squeezed into her attic hiding place, could still believe that people are good at heart, then who are we to lose that faith?
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely. Most people are, but one bad apple...and our response must be robust - in considered action, in words, in song/art. Use every means to get the message across...
DeleteVery nice! (As always...)
ReplyDeleteThank you for being here..
DeleteI csn't help but feel, the speaker was searching outside for what was within
ReplyDeletePossibly. Very perspicacious :) Thanks for visiting..
DeleteThere is no song to that..., but your poem is well penned and real.
ReplyDeleteGreat to see you here Ayala, thanks.
DeleteA powerful poem and beautifully written. Shivers ran down my spine at the twist. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThank you, glad you liked it.
DeleteJust when I think the world can't get crazier it does. Love the poem. As usual you've penned the moment!
ReplyDeleteCrazier in a different direction now!
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