You
come to a point in that field, and there
the
winds are mussing the crops' long hair,
and
out of the next window, half shuttered -
a
farmer at lunch, a whirlpool of birds.
The thresh of blurred gravel next to the wheels.
On
the far side another one reveals
a
moment of bamboo, a flash of fig -
a
station rolls past, the platforms - red brick
and
yellow signage, commuters everywhere -
but
it’s diesel now, or clean electric.
LOVE the wind mussing the crops' long hair.
ReplyDeleteAnd am forced to admit that as a very young thing I pictured Italy as full of fields of spaghetti, waving in the wind.
That is such a lovely image and so apt :) wouldn't it be great if we could keep those pictures untouched in our heads as we grow up?
DeleteVery visual! I pleasant train ride across the country.
ReplyDeleteLove train journeys! steam locos or not
Deletenicely drawn imagery
ReplyDeleteglad you liked it, thanks
DeleteHi Nila - love the wind mussing the crops long hair ... but the steam requiem: we have a few nostalgic restored heritage lines which have started up - and it brings back childhood memories ... puffing steam trains with whistles ...
ReplyDeletecheers Hilary
We have a few too - some of them really scenic routes through the Himalayas! Puffing trains were the best!
DeleteThere's something so grand about steam engine locomotives. The things we give up in the name of progress...
ReplyDeleteCouldn't agree more! and I'd take the train over jet planes any day given a choice
Deleteno chug, just a whoosh as the train rolls along. Excellent imagery
ReplyDeletechugs were way more musical!
DeleteHey keep posting such good and meaningful articles.
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