Sunday 1 November 2020

Tar and Cement and Javed Akhtar

 


Go back to the stream where paper boats plied

after school, where a plume of smoke rose alone

over the wood that was the entire hillside –

that’s now a resort, every inch occupied.

Rows of crafts for water sports, mobile phone

ads, leftover hoardings from spring sales, rides

on animals and machines. The hillside’s gone.


The busker coaxing tunes from a flute - the old folk

have vanished like that single plume of smoke.

 

Go back to those villages of childhood

you’ll find cities settled there now, yellow lined

roads ordering your movements. Panicked, crude

graffiti in public spaces. Turn and look, you’ll find

nothing of the hillside you’d left behind.



Javed Akhtar is a contemporary Indian poet who writes in Urdu, I was listening to some of his poetry - tum apne qasbon mein jaake dekho/wahan bhi ab shehr hi basein hain - the lines reminded me of this song 




...and from there the above lines kind of diffused out. Not that I am saying ubanisation or tourism should not happen and we should all go back to drawing water from borewells and threshing grain manually and so on. Sustainable progress is what I'm after, if you know what I mean. :) Have a good November, and a great NaNo, those who're going for it. Keep safe, keep calm, keep fit.




13 comments:

  1. Thank you for the song which was new to me.
    Why oh why is progress so often destructive? Sometimes wantonly, wilfuly so...

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    1. Progress needs tempering with good sense which is often not the case, sadly..

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  2. Hi Nila - what a gorgeous song ... and yes progress is good ... but those days when life was gentler, softer, less demanding for one and all would be the best. Take care and stay safe - loving the song! Hilary

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    1. Hi Hilary, Wouldn't it be great if we could keep that past gentleness while also retaining the advantages of modern life/technology?
      You stay safe and well too!

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  3. Hari OM
    Spot on, Nila... I totally understand your 'sustainable progress' desire. Sigh... YAM xx

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    1. It's bugging that we throw away so much in the name of progress...

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  4. Like the comment above - sustainable progress is preferred. We want it all - nature fresh, but modern "stuff and convenience". It's tricky to maintain the right mix. We yearn for that hillside - walk barefoot and ply paper boats down a stream. Song and poem - just right.

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    1. It's very tricky indeed balancing things - partly why this has happened. We grab more than we need. It's complicated to think of the future.

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  5. Going back to my old childhood places in Detroit, they are gone or wrecked.

    Love that song. Takes me back.

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    1. I remember your moving poetry on Detroit.

      Great song - was introduced to it by another blogger friend and just fell for it right away! :)

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  6. I like your tar and cement javed akhar article
    wooden bed in Jaipur

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  7. Ah, it's always nice to remember the old days and forget the hardships. Your words express the poignancy. 'Tar and Cement' is definitely a golden oldie.

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    1. Old days are just the antidote for the current hardships methinks. :) Tar and Cement basically sums up the story of every small town chap/gal who moves to big city...

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