The
city skyline is a step function,
the
song’s just static on the radio,
splattered
pigeon droppings on the windshield,
and
drizzly leaf reflections come and go,
there
are leopards in the clouds and the lake
is
rippling with their roaring open mouths.
Knots
of students and their drooping backpacks
slowly
move from the north towards the south.
The
road’s a patchy old moulted snakeskin,
the
signal at the crossing a beggar’s claw
telling
you to slow down, stop, throw a coin,
make
eye contact, perhaps unclench your jaw
but
the crossing’s a dead end and a slim
young boy stands there selling a smile that's dim.
I've no idea where this has come from :) It's not Kolkata and it's certainly not any city in Fiji I've been to so far. The ones I've visited don't have skylines, all low rise buildings dwarfed/masked by the coconut palm trees...Even after so many years the whole process is utterly incomprehensible, what the brain dredges up from years ago and twists like one of those balloon shaped animals in an instant to look like this and presents as poetry.
Happy Mother's Day! - to you if you are mothering/have mothered, irrespective of gender. And have an equally happy week ahead.
Hari Om
ReplyDelete...has almost a sci-fi edge to it... great imagery. YAM xx
Thank you. It was rather visual :)
DeleteSo descriptive! Maybe someplace from your dreams?
ReplyDeleteYa, likely but not a recent one...
DeleteThe mind is indeed strange. There's a story there even if we don't know what it is.
ReplyDeleteHappy mother's day to you too.
Quite. It's a bit frustrating not to know the story, but one can't have everything, every backstory, reason, analysis...have to make do with however much is made available
DeleteEvocative and more than a little chilling...
ReplyDeleteHappy Mother's Day to you dear friend.
Thank you. Yes, the chilling part was a bit unsettling really..
DeleteHope your Mother's Day was a good one. We had a fine feast with Ray's folks. Your poem is eerie and bits of it - I think maybe you've been to Detroit - a sad shadow of itself, all with hollow smiles. Hmm. Very unsettling indeed.
ReplyDeleteThe feast sounds great! Glad your M Day went well.
DeleteI'd love to go to Detroit past or present, not yet been. Though I did read Arthur Hailey's Wheels way way back in the 70's, so...can't say if that has anything to do with it...
Happy Mother's Day to you Nila! You must be missing your son! Yes, it's wondrous where something that's been in your computer of a brain comes out when you least expect it. That boy at the end has a story to tell.
ReplyDeleteI did miss him sorely, Denise. I'm rubbish at being a groovy empty nester :)
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