Credit: Terry S Amstutz |
The house in the distance
its pumpkin-warm windows
flash out over an expanse
of naked fields, mown rows,
the crops gone, and an autumn
of fluorescent lilies floated home.
Did you swing by my haunts,
did I stop at your windows?it’s not really important
but they’re all good to know
why lilies replace the crop
and what lily-pads choose to cup.
Credit: Terry S. Amstutz |
to keep warmth in, all windows -
their metal must be weathered -
their polished panes must close,
show a glow-in-the-dark façade
but the warmth cannot be shared.
Shared at dVerse where the photography of mobius faith provides the prompt this day.
oh...love the pumpkin-warm windows...intriguing how you weave it together with the lily pic as well...the warmth cannot be shared..like when the inside and outside should be connected and aren't..
ReplyDeletetoo many instances of disconnects in our world...thanks for reading, and the prompt
DeleteLovely poem.
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Deletelove the last two lines... great choice of words. well done.
ReplyDeletethanks for reading and the feedback
Deletean autumn of flourescent lilies floated home....pumpkin windows...some magical visuals in this....i would hope warmth can be shared but know there are times it can not...
ReplyDeletetoo many times when it can't be shared, mostly for reasons beyond individual control...thanks for reading and your comments
DeleteLovely take on both pictures ~ I specially like the second stanza ~ lilies instead of crops and what they chose to cup ~ Our interpretations of warmth in this lily picture are contrasting ~ Smiles ~
ReplyDeleteVery awesomely interesting...the range of emotions in/interpretations of the same images :) thanks for reading
DeleteLovely visuals..nicely penned!
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DeleteWonderful combination of the pictures - the pumpkin windows - we all like - kind of the opposite of a jack-o=lantern. Thanks. k.
ReplyDeleteExactly so...reverse j-o-l! Thanks for reading
DeleteAh. Pumpkin-warm windows. Possibly the first use of that description in poetry.
ReplyDeleteGood to see you stop at my window! pumpkin-warm or otherwise. Thank you.
DeleteI agree with Brian the images you paint with words are magical. They are dancing in my head and twirling my thoughts about.
ReplyDeleteSo pleased to go dancing with yours! :) thank you
Deletewow...breathtaking imagery indeed..creates a unique atmosphere. stained with darkness yet as if glowing from within. i especially adore 'an autumn
ReplyDeleteof fluorescent lilies floated home'
Thank you.
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