I’ve got no flashy lamps to light, come take my hand
Touch trades off for lack of insight, come take my handbut we will go in together, upright, come take my hand
and once in a while be grasped too tight, come take my hand
It’s not measured in length or width or height, come take my hand
the way is dark but the reward’s bright, come take my hand
that’s when the stars come alive, alight, come take my hand
light’s always clarity. That’s also trite, come take my hand
My beautiful Nilanjana,
ReplyDeleteHave I ever told you that I love you name? Once again you write with deep emotions and tenderness. I can only say the man that will not hold your soft, silky hand has not been born yet (smile). I enjoyed you post today my friend. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you, Andy, for such chivalrous compliments...both for the hand and the pen :) the credit for the name, much as I would like to claim it, is really my familys who chose it for me :D glad you enjoyed the poetry
DeleteHello Nilanjana,
ReplyDeleteAm so sorry for being this late for getting back to you. thanks for visiting my blog and leaving those lovely compliments :)
I love your blog too!! I have always believed that its the simplest of words that convey the feelings of the heart best and your poem has reinforced my belief. Beautiful poem :)
P.S.- Am your 21st follower :)
Hello Swarnali,
DeleteThank you! And a warm welcome to my blog :) no late or early around here, anytime you get here is the exact right time :)
Hey Nilanjana:
ReplyDeleteLoved Loved loved this line Dark needn’t be something to fear, when it’s dark and the skies are clear
that’s when the stars come alive, alight, come take my hand
Sort of it lit my day :D Keep writing these poems are so good and you are your best at these!
Thanks Ramya! Good to know that...n yes, you guessed it right - am a night owl and not a lark :D
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