held close to the ear the dim roar of a muffled ocean and then it’s all here on its shore, the doorbell rings, recedes and disappears and a foghorn trails its vessel somewhere far over the horizon.
Thank you! am learning definitely...that's one Korean form and one Welsh, and before that the Tritina which is still kind of buzz, buzz, buzzing round in my head still...it's the internal rhymes I think that I am intimidated by :) but I shall not think about it now, let it settle to the bottom of the brain and see if something works itself out...thanks again for being here
ah :D short such a sweet one Nilanjana :D disappearing act was very nice !
ReplyDeleteshort one na...easy to make it disappear :) :) thanks Ramya!
DeleteDelightful verse.
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteAmazingly beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
Delete"and a foghorn trails its vessel
ReplyDeletesomewhere far over the horizon."
I love that!
Thank you for reading..appreciate the feedback!
DeleteI like the seashell echoes of the ocean ~ Lovely share ~
ReplyDeletethe smallest things take us on such amazing trips...thank you
DeleteVery nice :)
ReplyDeleteSo, what did you hear from the seashell Nilanjana? :)
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the entire ocean :) thanks for coming over
Deletebest wishes
There is a ring to this one, Nilanjana :D
ReplyDeletehope a nice one :D thanks, Ghazala!
Deletei love the thought of reading a verse like a seashell to your ear....very cool...and some nice sounds to go along with it as well...
ReplyDeleteand you should try the form...what is the worst? that you fail and still come away with a poem and a bit of learning?smiles.
Thank you! am learning definitely...that's one Korean form and one Welsh, and before that the Tritina which is still kind of buzz, buzz, buzzing round in my head still...it's the internal rhymes I think that I am intimidated by :) but I shall not think about it now, let it settle to the bottom of the brain and see if something works itself out...thanks again for being here
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