Image courtesy Rashmi Bhatnagar |
the year has suddenly paled to november
the sun wears comical visors to the frontthe palm wearies of the weight of her fruits
shakes down the dates, red and oblong
evenings drop in on silken feet, rake their fingers
through the last strands of golden hairnights harden but can’t nail their hearts
I’ll spear mine though with pigeon-throat songs
the sacred figs sharpen their leaves and remember
to observe ancient ratios of points to lengthsautumn colour grass somewhere in richlands
itches in yellow splashes on the ground
the seagull unravels a wave, and pretender
horizons masked in grey scarves of timeroll in, roll in and then recede and go home
I’ll go find mine in a verse of woodwind sounds.
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nice...so many atmospheric images..evenings drop in on silken feet..the seagulls, the verse of woodwind sounds...i didn't get my full dose of autumn yet... being here in the L.A. region for a few weeks, i had an extended summer though...
ReplyDeleteBeing on the Med Coast, I get a less colourful but more extended autumn...thanks for reading
Deletesmiles...love the woodwind sounds....and the rather funny image of the sun wearing a visor right up front....some wonderful imagery as well to go with the season that i love most dear....i wish autumn would stay a while...
ReplyDeletegreat to see you today....hope you are well...
DeleteThank you! Autumn is clearly a favourite with most writers :) wonderful to see you here today, and many thanks
DeleteI love the way you have characterized November. Some beautiful expressions within your poem! I especially like "in a verse of woodwind sounds."
ReplyDeleteThank you for reading
Deletegrey scarves of time -- nice
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DeleteThis is full of original imagery, punctuated by some breathtaking lines. Autumn is my favorite season but unfortunately here in the Rocky Mountains it is very short. Delightful verse.
ReplyDeleteBreathtaking colours to yours I am sure. Would love to see autumn in Rocky mtns!Thanks
Deleteso wonderful.
ReplyDelete" evenings drop in on silken feet, rake their fingers
through the last strands of golden hair"
loved this! beautiful imagery.
thank you for the feedback.
DeleteThis is just terrific. So many beautiful lines and descriptions. The raking fingers, the itch of the light - just wonderful. Really beautifully done. k.
ReplyDeleteThank you, glad you enjoyed it.
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