I forget.
Another day - a blanked out sky
the light stretched
taut and fine
as tortured muslin
on a loom.
Outside
the wind whistles and whips
massed barbed-wire branches
of thorn trees
against the panes
like trapped birds.
There’s the trip
you must make alonewell, not with me
at any rate.
Oddly bereft
that I forget
to be peeved.
A burnt stub left
in the ashtray otherwise clean.
You cleared away,
then lit up, it’s black now
just a faint burnt smell
in the room.
Nothing on the fridge -
no splayed open noteof squirming insects
waving cheeky legs
under the magnets
in tangible
four letter words.
Oddly bereft
that you did not disturb my rest
a short message
flashes and beeps
on the phone -
safely reached.
Years ago
I’d be upsetat this lack
of parting fuss
I would have
called it unfairness
that we forget.
Now I just
pick up the stublook at the phone
bereft and yet
not alone
breathe you in deep
and answer the text.
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this one is really touching... how time can dull our emotions.
ReplyDelete"Nothing on the fridge -
no splayed open note
of squirming insects
waving cheeky legs
under the magnets
in tangible
four letter words."
loved this stanza, wonderful poem!
no splayed open note
ReplyDeleteof squirming insects
waving cheeky legs
under the magnets
in tangible
four letter words...great description...smiles....nice story telling as well....waking up alone, i am glad you have that comfort (it seems) in knowing they will return...
i love little notes...
love is a four letter word...me too ditto on the notes...like long ones too :) thank you for reading
DeleteI like the turn of the story from not wanting to forget or fuss to just everyday mundane forgetting, just another day ~ I also like tortured muslim on the loom ~
ReplyDeleteYour poem shows how things once so important often eventually (perhaps sadly) fade away; but the caring does remain. I found this poem expressed reality, and I like that.
ReplyDeleteAmazing how the years can change the reflexes. Fun! Thanx
ReplyDeleteGreat imagery and emotion. Really enjoyed this read and your take on the prompt.
ReplyDeleteA great take on when a "love affair dies". Sad, but clearly over, yet still strung with responsibilities. I like what's not said in the poem, the open endedness. Very effective.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Beachanny that you do so much with the lacunas. The imagery is original and stark. Intriguing verse!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the poem and what you did with the prompt.
ReplyDeletei too love the squirming insects especially...i like how you take us on the journey through your mind with you here...grounded in reality..sensitively penned
ReplyDeleteThank you all for reading and the feedback...truly appreciated!
ReplyDeleteoh how beautiful it is NB,
ReplyDeleteLoved this line
and yet
not alone
breathe you in deep
read this poem again and again to get the best essence of it, oh you are such a magician with words...
Fantastic keep writing
thank you Ramya...my fav too! :)
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