It feels like a
slight; unbearable snub
that everything’s the
same, not one bloom
from the vases has drooped,
the garden shrub
you had planted is still
upright, the room
just as it was before,
the cushions rubbed
threadbare where you
had sat. The planet zooms
on its exact track, no
change in pace or hub.
Only you are gone,
even your perfumes
linger still
in wardrobes and empty gloves.
Ashes to ashes. A deadpan
earth subsumes
every flake till
nothing is left above.
The house’s strangely unchanged.
I resume,
but with shifts in
meanings of loss and love.
For a grieving friend, with love, respect and wishes for strength and peace as she copes with her loss.
Very sorry for your friend.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your compassion.
DeleteGood bye my love good bye
ReplyDeleteyour dreams and mine touched
stars shined down from above
sweet honeysuckle in the air
good bye till we meet again
my heart beating out this life
knowing there will be a time we’ll
see each other again for eternity
The lost of a love one
rips deep into ones soul
It does indeed. and an untimely loss is even more difficult..
DeleteHi Nila! I'm back. My iPad kept freezing up when I tried to comment when overseas. I was by reading your poems though.
ReplyDeleteThis is so poignant: 'the cushions rubbe
threadbare where you had sat'. What a very powerful tribute to your grieving friend and the untimely loss.
Denise :-)
Hi Denise! Welcome back! Looking forward to more photos and travel writing on your blog. I find it really hard to blog while travelling, so hat's off to you :-)
Delete'Nothing in the house had changed, just the person who had made it a home wasn't there' - my friend said that, and it so resonated with me. Life can be rough at times, even though beautiful.
A beautiful tribute, Nila!
ReplyDeleteI love the way you portray the change as being something that you cannot actually 'put your finger on'...
It's a mental/emotional shift... subtle... and subjective too.
Thanks, Michelle! Change is easier felt than pinned down in words, and the greater, more overwhelming the change the more difficult is it to be objective about it..
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