Time wrings the beauty out of
everything -
the morning now just shattered
shards of light,
the depth of darkness sucked off
from the night,
the moon crushed, forlorn, like a
crumpled mothwing.
The road’s shell shocked, the world’s
a drunken camp,
the heart of workdays stifling,
oppressive,
the weekends frazzled with no
rest to give,
the days hamster wheels, the sun
a rubber stamp.
Just one face in the crowd means breathe
and dream;
just one glance, one word can
forge a connect.
Just one face missing and decades
are wrecked
and years become an angsty high-pitched
scream.
We either speak too soon or speak
too late;
the chance knocks once and does
not know to wait.
You have penned another powerful truth.
ReplyDeleteA frightening AND exciting powerful truth.
Frightening almost always is potentially exciting :)
DeleteTime could have the opposite effect.
ReplyDeleteForgive me, but I think the truth went over my head.
Quite. Time can wreck things as well as soften things. The presence or absence of one person can make or mar an individual world.
DeleteHi Nila - lots of thoughts and ideas here ... the moon crushed, crumpled - covered with story cloudlings ... one face, one gentle smile .. can bring us in - just one face of the moon, or the heated sun ... a glimpse through the trees - a very evocative post ... cheers Hilary
ReplyDeleteOne face can make an impact...a loved one of course but even a stranger, one word can make a difference...one poem can lift or murder someone's mood :)
DeleteHave a great week Hilary!
Yet chance is that and is not fate
ReplyDeleteSo it seems it’s never too late
A face you seek no glance was found
Your screams will comes back around
The wheel is like that rolling sun
One shells their heart for dunking fun
The moon and darkness together run
Death in time takes everyone
++++++
Another year has gone around
like a wheel this life of ours.
We add more grease so none
hears the squeak of age and wear.
Yet time will not stop for us
and someday our wheel will
be cast aside for a newer one
Yup, time stops for no-one...there is a line in the Hindu scriptures about the soul casting off the old body and assuming a new one just as a man casts off old clothes and wears fresh ones...that just popped into mind on reading your verse here...
Delete'The world's a crumpled camp...' yes, my eyes stopped there. What a perfect description of our world. Sadly. So much in so few words Nila. :-)
ReplyDeleteMore than just one face missing for far too many people...especially where I am at...
Deletethanks for sharing such a wonderful post
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You poetry is as deep as sad. It feels like we need somebody to stand by us to handle with life circle.
ReplyDeleteIt always helps to have a travel companion, deepens the enjoyment, halves the troubles...thanks for coming by.
DeleteThat's great. And the we either speak too soon or too late....so true.
ReplyDeleteGood to just zip d lips sometimes :) thanks
DeleteIndeed:) I really enjoyed the poem.
DeleteThis post really made me think. Thanks for sharing.
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