This is where
poetry comes from -
the textured silk
of the sea.
The sunset hitting
a window frame
quiet iridescence
of beauty.
The abrupt blinking
of small screens.
Spider webs of unused rooms.
The stab that makes
the silence scream.
Empty bottles of perfume.
The yellow ribbons
of the road,
the white ribbons
of contrails,
the silver shined
parallel ropes
of long-distance vanishing
rails.
The mists quivery
with early light,
a lone boat returning late.
The scattered
shrapnel of a life,
the shudder of a mangled
gate.
The strange geometry
of geodes.
Comfort zones of shaggy mundane.
The footwork of
slow dancing blood
in the long
corridors of veins.
Stunning.
ReplyDeleteIt is also bred in spider-web intricacy, silent screams and coraline bones.
Aren't we luck it is so ubiquitous?
So true. Coraline homes and spider homes. Overland, underwater, in the air - everywhere. We are blessed indeed.
DeleteA wonderful stroll though the garden of you imagination to bask in the flowers of poetry.
ReplyDeleteGardens of imagination are the best gardens ever :)
DeleteSpeechless! It leaves the reader speechless.. your sublime poetry . Made me realise how I habitually, routinely skip observing the minute details of my existence, that a poet so instinctively does! Thanks for this .
ReplyDeleteLove and best wishes,
Moon
Thank you. 'God is in the details.' Life is also in the details. :) Have the loveliest Sunday.
DeleteAs I read this poem, I felt for an instant I could see myself writing poetry. Now that is amazing! Excellent expression of the essence of an art.
ReplyDeleteVisit me @ Life & Faith in Caneyhead. 😉
You totally could! Please do give it a shot. It's great fun :) thanks for stopping by.
DeleteHi Nila ... 'I said, in my head - that is where poetry is bred.'
ReplyDeleteWell not me - but you yes ... I need the spools of my mind to weave and wrap their images into words ... which usually doesn't happen. Love the images you've given us though ... golden words for us to dwell in - cheers Hilary
Yup...everything starts with the head and then the heart gets roped in and then it's a tug of war and a free for all :)
DeleteDisturbing news this morning from your end Hilary, hope all your loved ones are safe and well.
I love this... it's so evocative.
ReplyDeleteYour poetry is really beautiful. Always.
Thanks, Michelle. Glad you enjoyed it. Have a great Sunday.
DeletePoetry for me started after I lost both mother and husband nineteen years ago. Poetry shares my inner most thoughts and feelings.
ReplyDeleteLoved your poem, great to read.
Yvonne.
Poetry is a good way to process events too big to handle otherwise, it's therapy. Life can be very unfair. Thank you for your perspective.
DeleteIt is bred in time. The time you take to observe. The time involved in finding the right words. Thank you for your time and poetry
ReplyDeleteProfoundly true. Thanks for sharing that insight!
DeleteYes, almost everything can serve as inspiration for those who are truly creative!
ReplyDeleteThank you! that is a lovely compliment.
DeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Ayala!
DeleteSo beautiful! I love it. You know, you could furnish this piece as about fifteen writing prompts for any given writer. Truly lovely.
ReplyDeleteThank you! and thank you for the idea too, I'm going to apply it to myself and see if it 'breeds' anything :)
Deletehave you ever put out your own book of poetry?
ReplyDeletejoy @ The Joyous Living
Not yet :) but screwing up courage :)
DeleteInspiration comes from the amazing places. Really enjoyed this!
ReplyDeleteIndeed it does come from the oddest things. Glad you enjoyed the poetry. Thanks for visiting.
Deleteyou write beautifully...
ReplyDeleteThank you for stopping by.
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