What colour's your poem? she asked.
I said,
mostly blues and greens, some
yellow, some red.
Like twilight - maybe a shade of
lilac –
some of it fluorescent, some grey
and drab
and some parts dissolved small
town mud track,
silvered power cuts with a few
dabs
of starshine. Lost
fishhooks on dry riverbeds,
waving heat haze and groundnut
pyramids.
Some lines white, some
unavoidably black.
What colour is your poetry?
I replied,
some quite see-through, like
rainfall on the wide
lit savannahs, on which the long
grass feeds
and grows its shadow, neat
corn-rowed mornings,
windows missing louvres of glass.
Low-speed
smiles, bright swimsuits flashing
in the hot springs
in deep forest. The negative
space between
points of bison horns, the dragon
fly sheen
of streams. And some
as opaque as safekeeping.
How evocative and beautiful.
ReplyDeleteI have to ask: What colour are your memories? And your heart?
Thank you. Heart's probably a muddy bloody nondescript colour :) but memories, for the most part, sparkly gemstones and candy-coloured too, for which I'm seriously grateful.
DeleteLove it!
ReplyDeleteThank you, glad you liked it.
DeleteHi Nila - wonderful to read ... colours really add to our vision and view of our world around us ... I think probably I'm Persian colours and African reds and ochre - then of course the English greens ... just a wonderful world we live in - if our colours match others' view of the world ...
ReplyDeleteGorgeous - cheers Hilary
Thanks Hilary. You are so right. Glad that we human 'beans' can see a wider range of colours as compared to many other mammals.
Deletethis poem paints such a vision of word colors. Richness abounds
ReplyDeleteYup, the world is rich..so thankful.
DeleteIncredibly descriptive - like it's a alive.
ReplyDeleteThank you, that's high praise!
DeleteThis is pure genius! Love it and the way it makes me feel.
ReplyDeleteSo glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for stopping by.
DeleteThat's a very unique way to approach the subject. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteHmmm...is it an approach I'm wondering? Didn't quite occur to me to think of it that way. Glad you enjoyed it, though.
DeleteWell, I probably could have used a more appropriate word than "approach."
DeleteNot at all. Your word choices are always thoughtful, nothing wrong with approach - just that it makes my poetry sound more systematic than it is. I struggle regularly for more control, more 'organisation', so...
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