I am only my road, my winding route,
you are the mango orchard beside it.
You’re the languid afternoon, heavy with fruit.
You are the absence that makes the music –
the blowhole and openings of the flute.
An orchid-white jet contrail, I’m hardly there
once the craft has flown, easily confused
with a daub of cloud. You’re water, and air.
The one true north, the point where all routes
are housed;
my broad breathing earth; my paved city square.
This is beautiful. And poignant. I fear I have lost my one true north, overwhelmed by artificial light and noise.
ReplyDeleteOh no, EC...if you had you wouldn't be able to do what you do - the walk, the observations, the photographs, the expansive generosity of spirit. The external true north is fluid, but the internal north shines steady and is not so easily lost. We're often hesitant about it, but it's there.
DeleteThank you for this incredibly generous comment. I hope you are right and it is there, and will emerge again.
DeleteHari OM
ReplyDeleteSuch trust and love! YAM xx
You and I are interchangeable. :) <3
Deletesuch heart. Dang!
ReplyDeleteI like Dang - it's a great compliment to any poetry! :)
DeleteHi Nila - I love the idea that 'absence that makes the music –
ReplyDeletethe blowhole and openings of the flute.' While our breathing earth lets us find the route to the north, before it turns and brings us back ... thank you - Hilary
Glad you liked that line, Hilary.
DeleteWe need a point of stability in life.
ReplyDeleteTotally true!
DeleteWow, Nila, you get better and better. You must have wowed them at your poetry festival. 'you are the mango orchard beside it.
ReplyDeleteYou’re the languid afternoon, heavy with fruit.' Wonderful.
The poetry evening was fun - I always think more fun for the poets ;) Glad you liked the poem, thanks.
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