I do not like the shape of your temple.
The doors and arches are too narrow
the steps are too high, the halls aren’t ample
it thrusts me aside, it does not invite
something about it doesn’t feel quite right
the pillar’s all wrong, the walls don’t seem strong
the chants don’t carry the public along
and the whole foundation’s shallow.
I think I’ll stay home. I’ll look for my deity
in some other place outside your city
less discriminatory, with a kinder story,
where exclusivity isn’t mandatory
and anyone can come and go.
Hari Om
ReplyDelete...I'll join you, if I may... YAM xx
Please do! :)
DeleteEchoing Yam.
ReplyDeleteI so often find my cathedrals outside, with no walls to confine them.
Totally with you there. Nature makes the best places of worship.
DeleteI'm with you absolutely. A sunrise or a sunset will do the trick
ReplyDeleteOh yes the best possible spiritual environment, that. The heart automatically drops to its knees.
DeleteIt's not the building, it's the people, and where they gather in God's name is church even if not in a building.
ReplyDeleteExactly! the surroundings don't matter. 'He prayeth best who loveth best all things great and small.'
DeleteIf someone has hate in his heart for his fellow men, I don't see how any building can help him reach God.
Hi Nila - you have some wise commenters ... couldn't disagree with you or them ... we are our own cathedral - safe within ourselves ... being wise with our thoughts ... take care - Hilary
ReplyDeleteHi Hilary, so in agreement with you - our hearts/consciences are our own architectures of devotion, nothing can be more solid, more hallowed than that.
DeleteWow. Stunning prose.
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Reminds me of my decision at 16, not to join the church I'd grown up in. A racist environment. Amazing how religion can be even more exclusionary than society. Beautifully said!
ReplyDeleteOrganised religion has always been discriminatory, but in recent years the environment in India has become even more toxic.
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