Sometimes a dove will sit on
the railing
and swivel its head, very canny,
very wise -
late afternoon and the light’s
quietly failing
but something breath taking
happens to the skies.
A high rigged truck will
come around trailing
its discordant sounds topped
by pneumatic sighs
and leave a fluorescent
silence where words die
drop out defeated however
hard they try.
Ordinary events of urban landscapes
-
a flash of coloured scarf, a
certain note
of moonlight and the
changing shadow shapes.
The calligraphic wakes of a
speedboat
mirrored by migrant
flamingos as they fly.
Sometimes the words just won’t
fit - that’s why.
The words won't fly?
ReplyDeleteYou are a stranger to the truth.
These arrowed their way directly to my heart.
I'm glad they did...thank you.
DeleteHari OM
ReplyDeleteI second EC's response!!! YAM xx
Thanks, Yamini, I hope you're doing well.
DeleteFluorescent silence - now that's descriptive!
ReplyDeleteWhat I wanted to say was like a disco in between pieces of music...glad you liked the description..
DeleteI re-read this a few times, each gives more layers and I hear different sounds or sighs, and then maybe the dove coos....
ReplyDeleteLovely
Silence is never really 100% silent, is it? So many different sounds go into the making of it. Pleased you enjoyed the poem.
DeleteNila, your words do indeed fly right to my heart. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThat makes me think of humming birds for some reason! Great to see you here, Denise.
DeleteAnd yet those words keep coming. Disjointed and yet perfectly aligned! I love what you create!
ReplyDeleteThey do, whether one likes or not, out of control!
DeleteBut they did fit! It had a rhythm all its own. Thanks for the experience.
ReplyDeleteGlad you think so! Thanks, great to see you here.
DeleteHi Nila - always a delight to read ... so much inferred, so much to think about ... 'discordant sounds topped by pneumatic sighs' - beautiful sounds of birdsong ... overwrought pandemic sighs ... just desperate times. I feel for all ... but am so thankful I breathe easily ... I'm a lucky person in this discombobulated world. Definitely not as discombobulated as it was - let's hope we have hope in this world. All the best - Hilary
ReplyDeleteDiscombobulate is such a weighty and delightfully descriptive word! I'm so pleased you are not being positive and hopeful...stay safe, stay lucky, wishing you serenity and good health.
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