I yearn to write you a poem
that when you read you don't stumble
on the raised fists and frowns of phrases
on hairpin bends and sharp angles
not even a downturn of a comma
and don't skid to a stop anywhere
blinking in too harsh a sunlight.
And as you read - those stanzas
fall like toes dipping into the river
fringed cool with low hanging branches.
Like a cocoon spun of afternoons
and pigeon throated iridescence.
Like mountain mists you breathe in
as you move through them they vanish
deep inside your membranes.
By the time you get to the end
it's bound fast to your pith
it's coursing through you gently
so easy in your channels
that you feel it was yours always
in this life and the previous
and all the unlived ones to come
for all eternity.
Hari OM
ReplyDeleteThank you for penning
a salve your yearning!
A blessed new year
to a blogpal dear.
May you find in twenty twenty one
lots of peace and, yes, some fun!
YAM xx
A response in verse! That is so fun! Thank you.
DeleteAnd if anyone can write that poem of comfort, beauty and quiet joy it is you.
ReplyDeleteThank you for that great compliment. So glad you liked it.
DeleteI think you just did!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
Deletea refreshing turn of phrase, so smooth. Did not break a beat or hesitate. Good start to this new year - you are off and running (writing). Thanks
ReplyDeleteThank you for the wishes and the review, glad you liked it.
DeleteA wonderful wish for a poem, Nila. You always surprise me with your turn of phrase - 'frowns of phrases' - genius.
ReplyDeleteThat makes me very happy - that I'm able to surprise after these many years :) thank you, Denise for being here, for the encouragement and support always.
DeleteThis is really beautiful. I love that it's a poem about writing a poem. Yet it's more than that. You've really given the gift of words with this.
ReplyDeleteI hope your New Year is going well. I only read and reviewed 23 books last year, but my goal for this year is 30. My other goals are to publish another fiction book in 2021, do the Blogging from A to Z Challenge in April, and increase the number of authors helped by Operation Awesome.
Thank you, J Lenni, pleased you enjoyed the poem. My New Year is same old, same old, I'm afraid :) but still, I am hopeful for a fresh start.
Delete23 books is a sizeable number, you did lots, given how rubbish 2020 was! Congratulations and best wishes for achieving all your goals this year.
Dear Nila - I'll join you in yearning for a life beyond the stumble we seem to be in. Take care and withyearning thoughts for an easier year ahead - Hilary
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