Monday, 30 March 2015

Truth's a hymn : For Amarjeet and Gayatri






The primal source, first vines that exploded
into life, gone dormant now, but nothing’s dead.
The truth’s a hymn, whether each sang or not
and love is truth, even if they left it unsaid.


The tavern’s full, but there’s always a spot
for those ones that the great patrons forgot.
The crowds nudge closer to clear a little space
and the Saki sets a cup and pours a shot.


There’s always love, and truth, and a small place
for those who cannot sing, don’t know the ways.
The vine knows to bloom and offers its pressed
red gifts to those who love, and self-efface.


And the Saki knows them too, all those blessed.
Love’s immortal but too rarely expressed;
but she knows that nothing’s ever wasted,
nothing’s lost from the goblet of each guest.



This poem, based on the Eastern fixed form rubai, goes out today for Amarjeet (Amar), the husband of Gayatri Gahlaut.  Amar is a keen golfer and a sports lover, and Gayatri is a poetry fan. They live in Delhi and are fond grandparents to Reyansh.



Gayatri won herself a blog post here in a contest, and she dedicated the prize to her husband.  An amazing uncanny coincidence, as love is on my mind right now. Well, to be honest, love is always on my mind, but it seems to have a special weight and texture this season J Gayatri’s name (which is the name of a particular goddess in the Hindu pantheon, and also used to refer to a hymn to the same deity), and Amar’s name (which means immortal) combine to form the prompt for this post.  Amr, which is a popular name here in the Middle East where I live, incidentally, derives from the root-word for ‘long life’ in Arabic, another uncanny coincidence that blew my mind. 



I hope both Amarjeet and Gayatri enjoy reading the poem as much as I have enjoyed writing it.



This unique contest was part of a pay-it-forward initiative at Buzzaria, my thanks to the team there for this opportunity to participate.





8 comments:

  1. Hi Nila! What a great idea for the contest! And I loved the poem.

    I hope to visit Delhi and New Delhi for the first time next year! Exciting eh?

    Denise :-)

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    1. Hi Denise,
      So good to see you here! And Delhi is completely insanely my fav city in India, so much history and culture and shopping and buzzing with great things. Have to look beyond the traffic snarls though :) Very excited and happy for you! Enjoy the planning and the trip.

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  2. Awesome...Thank you Nilanjana, for the beautiful poem and writing and dedicating the Poem to Amar and Gayatri. We at Buzzaria are eternally grateful.

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    1. It was amazing doing this together. All the right words just clicked into place! Can't think it was a coincidence!! :) Thanks to Buzzaria for the chance. Absolutely great way to start my week here.

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  3. Thanks a ton for this beautiful composition. I enjoyed every word. Love is so beautiful. !,, , thank you enough. Madly -in-verse

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    1. Hi Gayatri, and I am so, so glad to know you liked your prize! :D As you say, love is beautiful and beautiful its expressions, poetry or otherwise. Thank you for letting me use the name of your love and the chance to write it out..Have a great week.

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  4. "The vine knows to bloom and offers its pressed
    red gifts to those who love, and self-efface." -My two favorite lines

    Interesting contest concept!

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    1. Yes, I found the contest concept quite unique. It was amazing being part of it. Glad you liked the poem..

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