I took all the love-words, written, spoken,
those I traced on paper, and on your skin
and made a heap of the promises broken
like snapped chair legs, and I took each jasmine
kiss, fragrant petals unfurled against your mouth,
kept them pressed between the heavy, gilt edges
of waiting and footfalls, the empty music
in the risers of staircases, between the pages
and fingers of the afternoons, the tricks
of hours, and still got nowhere near the truth.
I love your words <3
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DeleteHi Nila - love the door representing two sides ... and then the poem untangling or trying to the thing that is love ... sad, but true .. cheers Hilary
ReplyDeleteHi Hilary, always two sides to doors and love and truth always plays hard to get :)
DeleteHello greetings and good wishes.
ReplyDeleteVery well written poem depicting the pain and anguish of a jilted lover or perhaps one sided love. Even being in love is a painful experience of living in uncertainity and uneasiness unless the lovers are sure of each other.
I suppose enduring love is based on the confidence and trust between lovers.
Fabulous poem.
Best wishes
Thank you. Love isn't possible without trust and respect.
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