The minutes pass only in clicks of keys,
the drumroll of space bars, the slight zephyr
of breathing, stale cigarette smoke, the broken
wheeze
of a machine, the silent turns of clever
codes, there is no talk, nothing anyone can hear
but a sudden eddy of air inches near.
A faraway crack of sound, a van tyre
bursts on the road, and flaps to a whining close;
the traffic's a rush of fluid, fuel and fire
seeping in thin red lines from shut windows.
Your voice is a perfume left on my wrist,
your footfalls the brush strokes of an artist.
Wow! so many different features moulded beautifully :)
ReplyDelete:) good to see you here Vandana, and thanks.
DeleteThat is beautiful, I can't even find the right words for how exquisitely it captures the moment.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much martine, great to know I managed to get that moment across!!
DeleteVery nice images and word choice throughout this piece.
ReplyDeletePleased to know you liked it :) thanks
DeleteAnd yet one seeks
ReplyDeletea lover on line
hiding from what
another might see
perfume left from
thoughts entwined
what I have written
is it truly about me
your words grab
this mind of mine
yet this dream will
never come to be
Wow! Speechless. Most unique compliment - thank you.
DeleteOn your second stanza
ReplyDeleteI missed it you see
The agony of death
How rude of me
I read it over and over
Going through each line
It seems I was reading it
As if I was totally blind
Memories is all that’s left
Of one that’ll never be gone
Of course with this blindness
Again I might be wrong
No right or wrong answers here...all free to interpret any which way readers like...
DeleteWistful...
ReplyDeleteI love the multi-sensory nature of your poem....
Life can get to be a multi-sensory assault sometimes :) thanks for being here, Michelle.
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