Sometimes a mood sings off-key, what can be done?
A partner turns to enmity, what can be done?
I’ve laid my cards flat open on the table,
not the suit of a dummy, what can be done?
The other plays high and that’s a heady chance
but those stakes are not for me, what can be done?
The tavern is full, the wine smiles as it’s poured
my cup can’t take its ruby, what can be done?
The saki moves in between and deals the hand
she picks the play and victory, what can be done?
This round being finessed with diamonds and hearts
the wins are hers, but wounds are free, what can be
done?
The ghazal is an eastern form. I have written about it before several times, here, there and everywhere.
wah,wah :) :)
ReplyDeleteTaslim! :)
Deletebeautiful composition
ReplyDeleteThank you Vandana..
DeleteNot this round, but maybe the next.
ReplyDeleteAh always the hope of the jackpot in the next :D
DeleteSuch fun!
ReplyDeleteHey Nila, wonderful to be back in the groove again!
Hey Yolanda! delighted to see you back in the groove! Look forward to your murderous posts :)
DeleteA game that’s played
ReplyDeleteBetween two lovers
Tho an open heart
To the others shown
If the ones stake
are to high it seems
another will jump in
That has a heart of stone
You are now out
And can not, win
And must suffer
Your pain alone
In a game of hearts who wins?
Sometimes the loser.
True that...and sometimes one has to lose everything before it can be won back
Delete'...the wine smiles as it is poured...' great personification. I totally get that one! Wonderful, as always. Now I'm waiting for that poetry book!
ReplyDeleteDenise :-)
the wine smiles and I smile to see it poured happy :D the poetry book will take a long time to come through :( ....BUT... we can keep sitting at the tavern and drink some more meanwhile :)
DeleteWould love to hear this set to tune.
ReplyDeleteWould have been delighted to oblige....just that I am crap at singing :-)
DeleteThanks for reading, great to see you here!
ash-ash Nilanjana ..
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