I can still feel the drizzle of your fingers
soft as the sea-sand on my face and hair;
some things are gone, it’s now many winters
the fallen leaves are banked in many layers;
there’s half an empty eggshell in the pond
floating next to the water hyacinth;
some kind of plastic scum in faded blonde
choking the small concrete steps and the plinth,
the bricks crumble gently and grow their cracks
and lure in grass and a banyan sapling;
but I can still feel the rain on their backs -
your hands don’t change unlike the other things.
And yes, this is where I’ve chosen to stand
surrender again to rain and your hands.
Totally off-topic, for those interested in my safari pics - there's a video clip in the sidebar. And maybe it's not all that off-topic either, plenty grass at any rate.
Very melancholy and sad...
ReplyDeleteMelancholy is my specialty! :)
Deleterather forlorn, and weary poem. Sigh
ReplyDeletehave a good week and I send a blog Valentine your way. Take care
Thank you for the Valentine! right back at you!
DeleteHi Nila - so many in the same state ... hanging on - as what comes next ...
ReplyDeleteLove the safari video of the lioness feeding - she looks relaxed and able to eat in comfort ... cheers Hilary
Glad you enjoyed it! I wish I'd thought of taking more moving pics instead of focussing solely on stills :)
DeleteThere can indeed be sadness associated with Valentine's Day, for some.
ReplyDeleteAlso, I'm quite impressed you found a rhyme for "hyacinth."
If we're talking last syllable rhyme, which we are here, then I can give you another - labyrinth! :)
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