I still dream. Of hills of
trees. Of banyan mists
and sandstorm suns.
Coffeepot clouds thread the day
into its hours one by one.
It persists
in see-through layers of
chiffon seaspray
wetting my toes. I still
dream of tender wrists
from long ago resting on
past laps, halfway
between memory, fiction,
forgotten myths.
Yes, still dream but can’t
recall all the details
except that they were beaded
with love, carefree
laidback. They didn’t ask
much. They left contrails
of laughter in curtained
rooms. They let me be,
weave in and out as I
wished, fall and fail
no big deal. They turned
pages of poetry.
Picked me up time after
time, though old and frail.
Yet another sonnet which plucks at my heart strings...
ReplyDeleteMine have got rather frayed this year...need some soothing past fixes..
DeleteHari OM
ReplyDeleteChildhood glimpses back to delights us through your words! YAM xx
Childhood is exactly where I want to retreat to right now!
DeleteI hope my grandchildren remember me like this.
ReplyDeleteThat's really the nicest compliment, Kristin. Thanks!
DeleteAw. This is so touching. And I truly wish you ultimately will publish a book of all of this lovely poetry produced on this blog. It absolutely touches my heart.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the support and encouragement - prized above rubies! Working on that manuscript - but life keeps getting in the way. :) Glad you enjoy the poetry.
DeleteSuch a sweet memory...
ReplyDeleteMemories are all that's left at the end...and even they do not endure.
DeleteThis is really neat. It also reminds me of older birds or outdated airplanes. Really vivid writing. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteI'm getting ready for the April Blogging from A to Z Challenge. And hoping to honor the wonderful women in my life on March 8 for International Women's Day.
J Lenni Dorner~ Co-host of the #AtoZchallenge, Debut Author Interviewer, Reference& Speculative Fiction Author
Thank you. All the best for the A-Z preps and actual event.
DeleteLots going on offline right now and through April, but I would like to join A-Z if I can sort things out.
Hi Nila - love the recollections ... I remember my mother's hands on her bed while I so often held her right hand during her stroked last years. My uncle too - always happy to have me hold his hand after his wife had died ... Recollections of life occluded with time ... with thoughts - Hilary
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