You
were the cardinal points, the belief
mere
air could not mess my hair in mischief,
you
were the map and compass, you were fair winds
and
the calmest seas anyone imagined.
You
were the deep woods, you were the sunshade,
you
were the rare skyblue that did not fade
and
the staunch white roof, also the winding route,
the
known and the uncharted and its pursuit.
Now
you walk among the stars, leave no mark
as
you come to check on yours in the dark,
I
grieve and I do not grieve that you are gone –
you
are never far and I am not alone.
Something
that’s faintly like a torn atlas
you’ve
left behind on the shelf for all of us.
Bittersweet and touching.
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it, thank you.
DeleteHari OM
ReplyDeleteI love the sense of ethereal guidance this suggests... YAM xx
The guidance is always there if we care to listen...
DeleteHi Nila - so true for so many ... we all need our compasses: both personal and worldly ... an enlightening experimental sonnet - thank you ... all the best, Hilary
ReplyDeleteYup, compasses are essential things both inner and outer...stay well, Hilary.
DeleteHeartfelt, beautiful and moving. I suspect those compasses always read true...
ReplyDeleteThey do indeed..
DeleteOh man, this really touched me. Never far....
ReplyDeleteNice to know it's done its job :)
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