Monday, 31 October 2022

Oh, the lifetimes it will live!



 


I get that all flesh is grass, quite apart

from the lofty meanings of transience

I get it the green that sprouts must also dry

but inside my head, deep down inside my heart

there’s a rejection of both faith and science

the decrees whatever blooms must also die.

Spare me the lectures, I’ve heard all that before -

my flesh is the grass and the herbivore.

Yes it dies and no it doesn’t, lives beyond

many lifetimes and treads the grass it’s made of,

how do you measure its lifespan as finite? –

make it fit into words to correspond

exactly as given, sans leeway and love,

demarcate its death and its depth and height?






17 comments:

  1. I like your perspective, though I am happy to think that my short lifespan will end, perhaps lingering for a while in other people's memory, but then gone to star dust.

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    1. Star dust is a lovely way to be. Stars have their own life cycles as well. <3

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  2. Sweet poem, but I like Elephant's Child comment about being star dust. I like that idea or just a grain of sand on a beach - that would work too.

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    1. Dust to dust, ashes to ashes....ultimately we are all going to be little specks dancing in a sunbeam then coalescing and reforming into something else. Beaches have their cycles of creation and destruction too, everyday and over millennia, sand and soil are such huge metaphors...

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  3. Hari OM
    I love the recycling elemental nature of 'life', which can be - and is - entirely separate from sentience... YAM xx

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    1. Exactly...life can and does go on...just not necessarily as a higher primate.. :) <3

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  4. I love it. I'm not a complicated person as to say why. But the poem is wonderful. Thanks for sharing..

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    1. Thank you! So glad you enjoyed reading. The best way to enjoy poems is where you can't quite pin why you like it...best way to enjoy anything imo. It's great to see you here. Have a peaceful and fun week.

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  5. Hi Nila - plant life does go on, doesn't it - animals end ... I suspect the grass doesn't realise it keeps going ... we know there will be an end - we just have no idea when. We really should live knowing that life is finite ... I'm glad I've had a reasonable length of time living ... cheers Hilary

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    1. Plants die too...all living things must, trees just have a huge lifespan, well most trees do, grasses die quickly yet grass does go on, coming up from withered to green after every rain...just beyond amazing. Wishing you much more of that reasonable length, long life and good health to you! <3

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  6. Oh, I like this one! It reminds of me of Auguries of Innocence by William Blake.

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    1. Thank you! That's just an amazing compliment, I will hold it close for the rest of the month :) So glad you enjoyed the poem.

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  7. Wonderful! Happy to connect to ur blog

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  8. Interesting. I love the philosophy offered here.

    "I write to give myself strength. I write to be the characters that I am not. I write to explore all the things I'm afraid of." —Joss Whedon

    J Lenni Dorner (he/him 👨🏽 or 🧑🏽 they/them) ~ Reference& Speculative Fiction Author, OperationAwesome6 Debut Author Interviewer, and Co-host of the #AtoZchallenge

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    1. Glad you liked it, thank you. We need not be limited to just a finite time span or space or even the human form.

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