is for Ya-du |
Again, turning towards the East for help. Ya-du is a Burmese form. Like all eastern forms subject to very tight
rules and regulations.
· Not more than 3 stanzas
· Each stanza of five lines
· First four lines of four syllables each
· Fifth line can have odd number of syllables – 5, 7, 9 or 11
· Climbing rhyme words like so
---a
--a-
-a-b
--b-
-b---...
where a and b signify the rhymes and
There also must be seasonal references, like the haiku.
Tough or what? But here’s me
trying, the rhyme words marked out in colour:
The spring dawns break
like mistaken
fall, take this hand
between and in
yours, stand with me, lean into the sparrow’s
song.
It won’t be there
anywhere soon;
the flare of sun
on sea runs once
even shorter than a birdcall in the
mist.
Posted for the A-Z Challenge.
liked the second one .. very interesting form..these rules and regulation thing spoils the creative urge ....nevertheless worth trying
ReplyDeleteAnother first for me.
ReplyDeleteSuch a fascinating form... and quite challenging too!
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