is for Ballad |
In simplest terms a ballad is a narrative poem with a straightforward
rhyme scheme (four line stanzas with xaxa and abab are common) and often, a refrain. The word ballad has evolved from the Latin ballare
which means to dance, so a ballad was originally a form intended for dancing to
(the word ball as in ball dancing comes from there too). A ballad
is therefore a song that tells a story but has been stripped of its tune.
The ballad I am posting for my A-Z entry is based on Karna (also known as Radheya after his foster mother, read more here). He is the most fascinating tragic character ever from the ancient Indian epic, Mahabharata. He fought on the losing side in a great war, and the battle between him and his half-brother Arjun is the climax of the story.
First among unequals
Of all
the sons that Kunti bore
the
first was by far the best;
a staunch friend in peace and in war,
a staunch friend in peace and in war,
stood
steadfast through every test
and
knew what he was standing for,
didn’t
deviate the slightest.
Of all
the sons that Kunti bore
her
first was by far the best.
It took
no courage to champion
the
winning cause and side;
when
justice was clearly being done
what
was there to decide?
But
when lines got blurred and uncertain,
easy
rules no more applied,
he
stood firm by his friend then,
tragic
prince and dignified.
Of all
the sons that Kunti bore
his
fate was the cruellest;
cast
off at birth, he floated ashore
to a
foster mother’s breast
loved
as her own, though low-born, poor
her
circumstances distressed.
Of all
the sons that Kunti bore
the first grew to be the best.
He was
a son of the Great Sun
and a
virgin’s thoughtless whim,
armoured
with the Sun’s protection;
yet his
trials many and grim.
And
when his life was finished and done
he’d
triumphed over all of them,
his
word and spirit never broken,
no-one
more kingly than him.
Of all
the sons that Kunti bore
Radheya
was the eldest.
His
birth mother came to his door,
threw a
lure in with a request
“Spare
my sons, their blood is yours;
they’ll
crown you king at my behest.”
Of all
the sons that Kunti bore
the
first born was the finest.
He paid
homage where it was due,
and
then he gave her his word,
“I’ll
spare the sons of king Pandu,
except
the middle-born third;
no
battle field can contain us two,
either
Arjun or I will be conquered.
Five
sons you have, I promise you
that
number will not be altered.”
Of all
the sons that Kunti bore
the
least loved turned out the best -
stood
by his friend in a misjudged war;
cursed
from birth, and dispossessed
yet he
fought well, loyal to his core,
and
went to a martyr’s rest.
Of all
the sons that Kunti bore
the
first born was the finest.
There it is, a narrative, a simple rhyme scheme, uncomplicated
stanzas, and a sort of refrain. Ballad.
And completely off topic, the word balady can mean native, traditional, rustic, folk and/or local in Egyptian colloquial Arabic, which for some unfathomable reason, makes me feel absurdly pleased.
Posted for the A-Z Challenge.
Posted for the A-Z Challenge.
Ballads are fun to read, write and easy to relate to :D
ReplyDeletePs I'm clueless abt the Mahabharata /.\
True, simple formats are easy on the ear, and hands. And you don't have to know the Mahabharata. It's an amazing read, though.
DeleteI guess, not being a poet, that ballads are one of my favourite poetic forms. I love sung ballads, which I think was one of the original ideas of this form. I was interested in the word balady and its multiple meanings.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing the ballad today, Nila.
Denise
Only some of the English ballads, the other languages still have sung ballads, Take Spanish.
DeleteThanks for being here.
I like Shakespeare's ballads and sonnets.
ReplyDeleteMe too, but sonnets more than the ballads in this case.
DeleteThat kicked a**.
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Thank you that's quite the best compliment today :D
DeleteHi Nilanjana,
ReplyDeleteI am hopeless when it comes to poetry. But I love the way you have explained what a ballad is and have recreated Karna's story. I am simply amazed! Thank you :)
Karna is a favourite character of mine, pleased you liked the retelling. Thanks for coming by.
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