Auden, W.H. (1907-1973)
Wystan Hugh Auden was an Anglo-American poet, one of the most influential voices of the last century. Click on his name above and read more about him. The specific poems of Auden that mine is a response to can be found here and here, this post uses a double prompt. If you prefer you can listen to them instead!
And here is the response :
Plus ça change, plus c’est la même chose...
Our planet in 2015
isn’t a dream in blue and
green;
a sprinkle of red paprika
on the usual spots in Africa.
Birds still have scarlet
legs
and women grow harvested
eggs;
some places too few babies
are born
others too many trafficked
for porn.
Lions and giraffes in urban
zoos
are killed off as their
keepers choose,
an uptick in poached tiger
parts
whaling’s refined to an
abstract art.
The civet’s trapped in a
small cage
the coffee it shits is all
the rage.
Dangers grow larger,
families small
the dogs in flats are huge
and tall.
Strange upheavals of soil
and air
feeds research on the ozone
layer;
earthquakes and volcano ash
cities doped up on digital
trash.
Half the population’s unshod
but the carbon footprint is
broad,
futuristic fuels are planned,
drones are automated
unmanned.
Education is a human right
but then the resources are
tight -
untold millions in refugee camps
thin blankets and sputtering
lamps.
Religion’s found an extreme
groove
violent crime is on the move.
High seas hide pirates in
old boats.
A lover’s spat can end in
shots.
Some learn to keep their
penis safe -
a rod is so much handier for
rape.
The law courts grow long in
the tooth
plucking the tissues for the
truth.
It’s increasingly acceptable
to covet a designer label -
a silver spooner is by birth
entitled to enhance their
worth.
Political leaders pretend
corruption isn’t a worldwide
trend.
Leather jackets and roadshow
but the German answer is still no.
but the German answer is still no.
The gun lobbies chuckle and
say
low grade warfare’s here to
stay;
some bullets must expand on
impact;
death is a long-drawn out fact.
In this world one peevish airman
can crash planes straight
into a mountain;
another that’s lost over the
sea
a year later and still no
debris!
Emails, facebook, social network
no time for ennui for any
clerk -
an empire was once free to
implode
now we fall to info overload.
But still the morning
glories refuse
to shut up shop or blow a
fuse.
Spring still comes round
once it’s April
the earth is lovely! even
downhill.
A word more about the contest that will run throughout the month, here on the A-Z posts. There will be giveaways for the top commenters after it is over, so do check back and make your opinions heard.
Whew. It was really difficult to choose a poet for A- there are too many maestros - Anna Akhmatova (Russian), Maya Angelou (American) Javed Akhtar (Indian).... the list is long and I can never pick one without tying myself in knots. Do you have a favourite writer for A? Do you struggle to decide favourites?
A word more about the contest that will run throughout the month, here on the A-Z posts. There will be giveaways for the top commenters after it is over, so do check back and make your opinions heard.
Hi Nila - what an amazing poem you've written - so many truths exposed - horrifying .. yet life will go on and give us happiness at times ... but we need to connect with others struggling with their lives. Fascinating thoughts here - so well expressed - congratulations - Hilary
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful indeed,, believe it or not but the civet shit coffee is as marvellous in taste as it is in price..,..hehe
ReplyDeleteI'll take your word for it, Gayatri, about the coffee, I mean :)
DeleteGlorious poem and author share.
ReplyDeleteWelcome in the "A"... as a host I am stopping by to say thank you!
Jeremy [Retro]
AtoZ Challenge Co-Host [2015]
There's no earthly way of knowing.
Which direction we are going!
HOLLYWOOD NUTS!
Come Visit: You know you want to know if me or Hollywood... is Nuts?
You delivered as I knew you would!
ReplyDeleteReally beautiful writing, Nila.
I love this poem... really gritty and so many truths... you hit the spot so many times!
When I think of Auden, the poem The Unknown Citizen springs to mind.
I love Maya Angelou and the work of Uwem Akpan (though I'm not sure if he wrote any poems, I only know his short stories)
Nila: thank you so much for beginning your A to Z with my favorite poet of all time! And what an incredible response you've given him. I know Wystan would have approved.
ReplyDeleteMy grandfather really enjoyed his work. He would recite it often. :)
ReplyDeleteYour response was Absolutely Amazing! You managed to miraculously mingle many hot topics together! It's great to meet you, Nila!
ReplyDeleteJulie
What a lovely post Thanks for sharing - I'm A-Z Blogger number 596 Leaning On The Gate - and having great fun so far!
ReplyDeleteWow, that's a lot to take in. I like to paint about our lovely and sad planet lying in the midst of space! Poems are word paintings!
ReplyDeleteFantastic! I really love the topic of your poem...and your writing style...very, very nice.
ReplyDeleteHi Nila!
ReplyDeleteI adore Maya Angelou! Lucky for me one of my senior students chose to research her and present one of her poems (Caged Bird) for her presentation. I love it when they choose my favourites--ahem, I don't influence them at all, truly!
Hope the challenge goes well for you!
Denise :-)
A powerful statement amazingly well done in verse form! I am with you in your summary though, no matter how many things are wrong with our tired old world, it is still a beautiful place, where live and love still abound... we only have to look for them! Great start for the A-Z!
ReplyDeleteA Remarkable Verse, with varied scenarios of the current year.
ReplyDeleteWell I'd say a realistic start.
A is for Arcadian smile ~ A Poesy Discourse
Amazing response to Auden's poetry. I'm not that familiar with his verse, so thanks for the introduction!
ReplyDeleteYou chose my favorite for "A" - the first year I did the challenge (2012), Auden led it off. So bravo! And a wonderful response with your poem.
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