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Remus and Romulus were the twins
said to have founded Rome, the linchpins
of legends and intrigue -
Romulus ahead by a league.
A wild creature by them through thick and thin.
Both the brothers when infants were
orphaned
helpless babes in river and woods
abandoned
a she-wolf came a-slinking
and I know what you’re thinking
but preparest thou to be now thoroughly
stunned.
She didn’t make mincemeat out of
the babies,
she didn’t chew them up or give
them rabies;
she gave milk and mother-love
and brought them straight up
to know their numbers and their
Latin AB’s.
But then the story gets murky, coz
sibling
rivalry spares no-one, they got
quibbling
Remus liked a different hill
and Romulus fought to kill,
didn’t believe in some casual nibbling.
And so Rome was founded by one twin
the survivor brother who did the
other in.
In plain words - fratricide
though legend doesn’t deride,
or call this dubious act a terrible
sin.
Quite clear that it took a long
time to build
From orphaned twins to getting a
sibling killed
That is why they say
Rome wasn’t built in a day
years to the finish from when first
pencilled.
I’ll bet you’ve never thought – cause no one does -
It’s so long ago so why make a
pointless fuss?
But think - if it so happened
the clash had a different end
then Rome wouldn’t be Rome, but
named for Remus.
The Rose may Remain a Rose, that which we call Rome (okay, the Limericking's over now, there's no need to Rhyme endlessly!) would probably smell quite different. What do you think? Do names shape the people/places? Or do the individuals/cities beat their names into shape? How important is a name? Would the rose petal smell as sweet if it were called popocatepetl instead?
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ReplyDeleteOh dear, what's in a name. Honestly, my first thought was Trump. I'm thinking he's the reincarnation of Remus, here to get his revenge. When I heard this morning the announcement of 'the most beautiful woman in the world'. I looked at my husband in disbelief and said, Trump will be the next President. OMG
ReplyDeleteNot to take away from the person chosen, but are there no accomplished women, beautiful women inside and out that would better qualify? I know stupid question. Sorry, it's late, I'm completely off topic, and I have a hundred blogs to visit. LOL
Just ignore my last 2 paragraphs! :)
Wishing you health and happiness!
OMG from my side too. Cheer up Yolanda - you guys at least have a say in who gets to be POTUS. We the general world can only wring our hands in agony/ROFLOAO, though I think nobody is ROF anymore. If he is really Remus, why isn't he going and plaguing the Italians? They have more practice in dealing with reincarnations from hell. :)
DeleteYou can be as off topic as you like over here, you've earned the right, and no need for any apologies. Have a great Thursday!
Oh, I believe a name of a thing can influence it greatly. I'm loving your limericking, so much so, that I've dragged you into the EOS Behind the Scenes Q edition! Hope you enjoy your visit to Viridis:)
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Thank you, your posts are, what can I say? Out of this world! Over to yours in a short while..thanks for visiting.
DeleteLovely post, Nilanjana. Your limerick sent me back to my teaching days. We had a Roman Day and as part of the story time, we read the story of Romulus and Remus (obviously it was a kiddi version). Thank you for a lovely, thought provoking post.
ReplyDeleteI remember learning that kiddie version story at school too! I learned it twice over, once as a kid story and then in history as a founding legend. Thanks for being here
DeleteNames are quite important. Often they give something or someone a feeling of the center of their identity.
ReplyDeleteAgree. Absolutely!
DeleteThis story I knew! Thanks to all the Rick Riordan books I've read! Names do matter a lot! What was that strange name you suggested for the Rose? No I like my rose just fine no name changes for it or anytig else....what's with folks renaming all cities in India?!
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Yeah, I don't like name changes either...especially of cities! Names have a history. Changing that without sound Reasons seems pointless, a lot of unnecessary upheavals and a Regrettable waste of energy. Gurugram indeed!
DeleteAs a writer I am so particular about names--they mean so much. I love the story of Remus and Romulus. I have seen sculptures of this legend and they are so intriguing.
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Yes, this has been represented in art and literature quite widely throughout the ages. So many different takes on orphans 'brought up' by wolves/animals.
DeleteIf only I'd been taught history this way! Another cracker.Thanks for pointing out my unexplained R word. A robinet is in fact a cannon!
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Ah, I suspected some such :) not related to the cute birdie I see...thanks much for clarifying!
DeleteLoved the poem. Combined my two favourite things poetry and history.
ReplyDeleteThe lines between history, mythology, legend and mystery get quite blurred in this case, which is what well behaved lines should be doing mostly :)
Delete"[S]he didn’t chew them up or give them rabies." I love your way with words!
ReplyDeleteWell, the illustration in the kiddie book looked completely rabid, from what I can remember, which I'll freely admit is dim. Very dim :)
DeleteLove this poem. Always loved the story of Remus and Romulus.
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DeleteVery clever poem. Enjoyed it thoroughly.
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it Kalpanaa. Thanks for being here
DeleteHi Nila - yes a great poem with so many ideas in it ... I could add so much more - but your thoughts re naming things - since Linnaeus' time ... so many are linked together and we can decipher so much from names ... especially here in Britain ... it makes life fun - when we get down to look - and then realise our thoughts hadn't occurred to us!
ReplyDeleteCheers Hilary