The
monsoon and I arrive, every year
about
the same time, and the sky’s shampooed
with
sudsy clouds, the asphalt’s rinsed in mud,
all
the way through the city up to here
awash
with reflections, the tree leaves clear
of
past dust, debris. But change’s accrued
in
infinitesimal moves of blood;
in
tiny degrees mapping atmosphere.
A
house has fallen vacant on a street -
overgrown,
greedy vines snap at its heels.
A
locked cupboard somewhere, an empty chair,
a
pair of old, worn slippers minus the feet.
The
city commute’s the same, the same rain wheels
across
the road, just that you aren’t there.
This is very, very beautiful - but makes my heart ache.
ReplyDeleteWonderful laid tale. One more victim claimed. Very touching
ReplyDeleteHeart breaking but oh so beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
Hi Nila - sad, especially knowing what's happened - we visit and they have gone ... it's life, though that is difficult to realise. Beautifully written - with thoughts - Hilary
ReplyDeleteVery sad but so visual.
ReplyDeleteHi Nila, so beautifully written, a scenario for a short doc or a video clip.
ReplyDeleteMira
a vacancy, a snuffed star...your poems here are working through your loss and capturing the ache perfectly.
ReplyDeleteVery nice! Loved the imagery invoked by "the sky’s shampooed
ReplyDeletewith sudsy clouds."
Thanks to all for reading! The monsoons in India are beyond beautiful - even in the cities :)
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank you. Glad you liked it.
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