I wake up early
when the pink pawsof light scrabble
at the windows
and your arm
is seaweed deeparound me
and I heave
the weight of
ancient, ancient lovesleep
rise slowly
a single small bubblebreaks the surface
weightless
the day mixes
its own scentsin hurried strokes
milk delivery,
newsprint kept
fresh, the medium
untainted by
the bombs and blood
it must carry,
get quick rich coffee
stale food somewherein the corner
of the sink
maybe the bin
needs a clean
the island in the kitchen
swiped of all presence
the light washes the road
like a cat with a pink clean tongue
leaf coloured
winds sweep inand lunge
at fallen litter
yesterday’s brown
paper packet
a scrap of chiffony
plastic wavesa flag
against the
chicken mesh
wire fence
and flowers
of Shiuliwith their
small pinwheel
faces and cheeky
monkey orange
bottoms thrust
up in the air
surround each tree
in its own whiteblossom island
who said I am not
an island?Linked to MeetingTheBar@dVerse
that was delightful. Having seen red-butt monkeys and some of your images helped me. Ioved your word choices.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite: "the light washes the road
like a cat with a
pink clean tongue"
Excellent! Thank you.
PS, I clicked the link. I wished more people would link their poems for readers who want more context, more hints, more background, more fullness. So they can understand what the author actually intended instead of using the poem as an Ink Blot solipistic indulgence ! :-)
ReplyDeleteThanx for the link!
Thanks for clicking through...n the feedback...glad you found the link useful
DeleteThis is beautiful Nilanjana...captured the day so well with imagery.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Janu...so pleased you liked it..
DeleteVery visual verse.
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Deletesmiles...this is lovely...very natural but also more....and great peace in it as well....light washes the road like a cat with a pink tongue...ha, love that description...
ReplyDeleteThank you for the feedback...much valued! The wash of autumn light....beyond every description..
DeleteAwesome imagery, fabulous poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sulekha...for everything here n elsewhere :)
Deletenice...love the question at the end...and...
ReplyDeletethe light washes the road
like a cat with a
pink clean tongue... is just an awesome image...i like much..
sometimes being an island feels so good, with all due respect to Donne! :) Thanks for coming over...so glad you enjoyed the question..
Deletethe day mixes
ReplyDeleteits own scents
in hurried strokes
milk delivery,
newsprint kept
fresh, the medium
untainted by
the bombs and blood
it must carry
i have never read a more perfect description of the morning routine. thank you for sharing this beautiful poem
Thank you for the feedback...much valued
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..a tremendous poem, Nilanjana!
ReplyDeleteThank you for reading...much appreciated..
DeleteI just logged in and read your poem. First read of my day.
ReplyDeleteMust tell you, made me feel languorous and beautiful :D