Roasted groundnuts in their shells;
busy, panicking squirrelsrunning up and down the old banyan tree;
far away, behind the temple
drummers beat a tattoo to signal
the coming worship of Durga and Navaratri.
The wind’s a shade more poignant
the light takes a different slant
the grasses wear white feathers in their caps
in the sky the first migrant
cranes fly in from some distant
lands with their unerring route-maps.
in rhythmic fall and rise
harvest the kharif crops in the fields
the sheaves and bales are tied
and stacked up on the side
and the farmer comes to measure up the yields.
The smell of charcoal smoke
from the chulas of simple folkhangs a pall over the city and the slum.
Young girls’ dupattas evoke
the colours of dried leaf stalks
the fiesta of detachment that is autumn.
And then one moonless night
the golden flicker of lamplight
throws soft shadows on courtyards and doorsills
fireworks burn bright
and pop to children’s delight
over the banyans, around the sacred basils.
Seasons come and pass each year
and I may be sitting herefar away from my land, somewhat homesick,
but the images remain clear
the whole sharp atmosphere
the fun and the pain both sweetly nostalgic.
Navaratri – a major Hindu festival celebrated in autumn
Kharif – means autumn in
Arabic, refers to the second cropping season
Chula – stove, usually a clay
stove burning wood, coal, or animal dung
Dupatta – a shawl type garment
used by women
The Indian festival of lamps,
Diwali, is also celebrated on a moonless autumn night
Linked to Poetics@dVerse, where the poems are about the coming of autumn
Linked to Poetics@dVerse
Appeals to all our senses ~ lovely
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Deletethis is wonderful...you evoke fall but in a cultural context that is fresh and appealing....really enjoyed the peek in at another land how fall affects its change there...you do touch all the senses really letting us experience it...i take it this is from memory and you are not there now...which is very cool as you can tell the impact on you...though a bit homesick...
ReplyDeleteThank you, Brian. Indeed have not spent autumn at "home" for many years now...it is from memory, though there's no telling whether the images reflect current realities, probably not...
Deletewow..so beautiful.
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DeleteThe autumn memories you shared were strong ones, written rich with feeling. The ending seems so true of so many memories we have: "the fun and the pain both sweetly nostalgic." I enjoyed your poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the visit and the feedback, much appreciated. I find it more and more impossible to disentangle the pain from the fun in memories..
DeleteYour words speak of your longing to be where your roots lie, beautifully expressed.
ReplyDeleteAnd the tug of roots is strongest at the festival season! :) Thanks for coming by, Sulekha.
DeleteMassterful job of painting a vivid picture for the reader to see. Beautiful writing!
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Deletenice...love the inclusion of the indian words...gives it a very special feel...oh i can feel the homesickness in your verse...beautifully penned
ReplyDeleteThank you, Claudia..appreciate the feedback....certain images can't be expressed w/o using the indian words....
DeleteI love your poem you can feel the atmosphere of what you describe and it draws you in. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the visit and your warm words. Glad you enjoyed the poem
DeleteSome great imagery here in your poem.
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DeleteSeems like NB you are missing Autumn back home or Home itself :D come down soon, you have beautifully described :D again :D loved it!!!
ReplyDeleteI always miss home at "Diwali/Durgapuja" time...but the monsoons are also good...that's when I get to connect :)Glad you liked the poem :)
DeleteAhh!!...what a beautiful description of Autumn!...Lovely poetry!
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DeleteThis is fascinating. Truly.
ReplyDeleteI loved reading about the different terms.
Thank you for coming by and the comment. Autumn is such a perfect time.
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